{"id":91,"date":"2017-07-25T22:24:00","date_gmt":"2017-07-25T22:24:00","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/atd-clinton-publicspeaking\/?post_type=chapter&#038;p=91"},"modified":"2017-07-25T22:57:59","modified_gmt":"2017-07-25T22:57:59","slug":"instructions-introduction-speech-draft-2","status":"publish","type":"chapter","link":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/atd-clinton-publicspeaking\/chapter\/instructions-introduction-speech-draft-2\/","title":{"raw":"Instructions:\u00a0Introduction Speech Draft","rendered":"Instructions:\u00a0Introduction Speech Draft"},"content":{"raw":"<p class=\"p1\">The draft is intended to reflect your best effort and understanding of the assignment.<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00a0 <\/span>When you submit your draft is meant to be your final version. This is what you plan to present unless I guide you otherwise.<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00a0 <\/span>My feedback on your draft is the grade to expect on the evaluation of how effectively you have written the speech for presentation if you were not to change a thing about the draft.<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00a0 <\/span>For example, If you receive an \u201cA\u201d on the draft and deliver it based on the draft, you will receive an \u201cA\u201d on the writing of the speech when you present it to the class.<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00a0 <\/span>If you receive a \u201cC\u201d on the draft and do not revise it, anticipate receiving a \u201cC\u201d on writing when you present it.<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00a0 <\/span>However, if you receive a \u201cC\u201d or \u201cD\u201d on the draft and choose to make revisions based on my feedback, it is possible that you will receive an \u201cA\u201d or \u201cB\u201d on the writing of the speech when you present it.<\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p1\">Turning in a quality draft is key to knowing if the writing of your speech meets the requirements of the assignment.<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00a0 <\/span>It also should give you confidence that you are practicing a successful speech to present.<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00a0 <\/span>You always have permission to tweak\/revise your draft to make it better!<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00a0 <\/span>Minor tweaking does not require additional drafts.<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00a0 <\/span>However, if you completely change direction.. the graded draft focused on your love of frogs and the speech given in class is about why you dream of becoming a nurse\u2026<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00a0 <\/span>a draft of the nurse focus is required before presenting the speech for evaluation.<\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p2\">Use correct identification information for the assignment.<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00a0 <\/span>Place on the left side of paper.<\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p3\"><b>Your Name<\/b><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p4\"><b> COM101- 0_C (Insert your section number)<\/b><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p4\"><b> Thomas<\/b><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p4\"><b> Introduction Speech Draft<\/b><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p2\">Type the following headings as place markers in your draft:<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00a0 <\/span><b>Opening, Body, and Conclusion<\/b><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p2\">Type draft in complete sentences.<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00a0 <\/span>May include stage directions if you plan to use technology\/visual aids. For example:<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00a0 <\/span>(Show picture) or (cue music.)<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00a0 <\/span>Use stage directions if you wish to include non-verbal reminders.<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00a0 <\/span>For example: (Pause), (smile), or (breathe.)<\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p2\">Length: 1-2 pages that are typed, double-spaced 12 point font size, regular margins. <b>This equates to a 3-4 minute speech when delivered with a conversational delivery style.<\/b><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p2\"><b>Total Points: 10.<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00a0 <\/span>Point Distribution:\u00a0<\/b><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p2\">Attention-Getter Strategy- 2 points<\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p2\">Includes name in draft- 2 points<\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p2\">Focus is clear- 2 points<\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p2\">Developed details link to focus- 2 points<\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p2\">Strong closing line- 2 points<\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p2\">HYPERLINK \"https:\/\/clinton.delhi.edu\/course\/modedit.php?update=839&amp;return=0&amp;sr=0\" \\t \"_blank\" <span class=\"s1\">\"Instructions for Introduction Speech\"<\/span>\u00a0by\u00a0Lee Ann,\u00a0 HYPERLINK \"https:\/\/clinton.delhi.edu\/course\/view.php?id=173\" \\t \"_blank\" <span class=\"s1\">COM101<\/span>,\u00a0 HYPERLINK \"http:\/\/clinton.edu\/\" \\t \"_blank\" <span class=\"s1\">Clinton Community College<\/span>\u00a0is licensed under\u00a0 HYPERLINK \"http:\/\/creativecommons.org\/licenses\/by\/4.0\" \\t \"_blank\" <span class=\"s1\">CC BY 4.0<\/span><\/p>\r\n&nbsp;\r\n<h3>Grading summary<\/h3>\r\n<div class=\"box boxaligncenter gradingsummarytable\">\r\n<table class=\"generaltable\">\r\n<tbody>\r\n<tr class=\"\">\r\n<td class=\"cell c0\">Participants<\/td>\r\n<td class=\"cell c1 lastcol\">18<\/td>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<tr class=\"\">\r\n<td class=\"cell c0\">Drafts<\/td>\r\n<td class=\"cell c1 lastcol\">0<\/td>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<tr class=\"\">\r\n<td class=\"cell c0\">Submitted<\/td>\r\n<td class=\"cell c1 lastcol\">0<\/td>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<tr class=\"\">\r\n<td class=\"cell c0\">Needs grading<\/td>\r\n<td class=\"cell c1 lastcol\">0<\/td>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<tr class=\"\">\r\n<td class=\"cell c0\">Due date<\/td>\r\n<td class=\"cell c1 lastcol\">Sunday, 10 September 2017, 11:55 PM<\/td>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<tr class=\"lastrow\">\r\n<td class=\"cell c0\">Time remaining<\/td>\r\n<td class=\"cell c1 lastcol\">47 days 5 hours<\/td>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<\/tbody>\r\n<\/table>\r\n<\/div>","rendered":"<p class=\"p1\">The draft is intended to reflect your best effort and understanding of the assignment.<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00a0 <\/span>When you submit your draft is meant to be your final version. This is what you plan to present unless I guide you otherwise.<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00a0 <\/span>My feedback on your draft is the grade to expect on the evaluation of how effectively you have written the speech for presentation if you were not to change a thing about the draft.<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00a0 <\/span>For example, If you receive an \u201cA\u201d on the draft and deliver it based on the draft, you will receive an \u201cA\u201d on the writing of the speech when you present it to the class.<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00a0 <\/span>If you receive a \u201cC\u201d on the draft and do not revise it, anticipate receiving a \u201cC\u201d on writing when you present it.<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00a0 <\/span>However, if you receive a \u201cC\u201d or \u201cD\u201d on the draft and choose to make revisions based on my feedback, it is possible that you will receive an \u201cA\u201d or \u201cB\u201d on the writing of the speech when you present it.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\">Turning in a quality draft is key to knowing if the writing of your speech meets the requirements of the assignment.<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00a0 <\/span>It also should give you confidence that you are practicing a successful speech to present.<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00a0 <\/span>You always have permission to tweak\/revise your draft to make it better!<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00a0 <\/span>Minor tweaking does not require additional drafts.<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00a0 <\/span>However, if you completely change direction.. the graded draft focused on your love of frogs and the speech given in class is about why you dream of becoming a nurse\u2026<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00a0 <\/span>a draft of the nurse focus is required before presenting the speech for evaluation.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p2\">Use correct identification information for the assignment.<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00a0 <\/span>Place on the left side of paper.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p3\"><b>Your Name<\/b><\/p>\n<p class=\"p4\"><b> COM101- 0_C (Insert your section number)<\/b><\/p>\n<p class=\"p4\"><b> Thomas<\/b><\/p>\n<p class=\"p4\"><b> Introduction Speech Draft<\/b><\/p>\n<p class=\"p2\">Type the following headings as place markers in your draft:<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00a0 <\/span><b>Opening, Body, and Conclusion<\/b><\/p>\n<p class=\"p2\">Type draft in complete sentences.<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00a0 <\/span>May include stage directions if you plan to use technology\/visual aids. 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