{"id":118,"date":"2017-02-10T17:08:28","date_gmt":"2017-02-10T17:08:28","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/suny-hccc-college-writing-1\/?post_type=chapter&#038;p=118"},"modified":"2017-05-16T14:11:23","modified_gmt":"2017-05-16T14:11:23","slug":"peer-exchange-getting-feedback-from-others-2","status":"publish","type":"chapter","link":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/atd-herkimer-collegewriting\/chapter\/peer-exchange-getting-feedback-from-others-2\/","title":{"raw":"Peer Exchange - Getting Feedback from Others","rendered":"Peer Exchange &#8211; Getting Feedback from Others"},"content":{"raw":"<b><strong style=\"font-style: inherit\">\u00a0Peer Exchange (Compare\/Contrast Essay)<\/strong><\/b>\r\n\r\n<b><strong style=\"font-style: inherit\">Directions:<\/strong><\/b><b><strong style=\"font-style: inherit\">\u00a0<\/strong><\/b>\r\n<ol>\r\n \t<li>\u00a0You have been assigned into groups of 4-5 people. You will have to post a copy of the 1st draft of your compare\/contrast essay in the discussion forum to allow other students to read it.\u00a0Once you do this, please begin reading your other classmates' essays and do the following:<\/li>\r\n<\/ol>\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li style=\"font-weight: inherit;font-style: inherit\">Edit the paper for any mistakes\/errors you see.<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li style=\"font-weight: inherit;font-style: inherit\">Read deeply and carefully for content, while \u201ccorrecting,\u201d and create a written response (post it as a reply in the discussion forum) for the author that addresses at least two of the following questions\/suggestions:<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<p style=\"padding-left: 60px\">o In what ways has the writer deepened your thinking or caused you to think differently about the topic (or some aspect of the topic)?<\/p>\r\n<p style=\"padding-left: 60px\">o Are there any other \u201cpoints\u201d\/\u201cparts\u201d that you could see being useful to the writer?\u00a0When you look at the subject matter chosen by the writer, how do you see them being of benefit?\u00a0Where would they fit in?<\/p>\r\n<p style=\"padding-left: 60px\">o Did the writer organize his\/her essay in a logical manner (one-side-at-a-time or point-by-point)?\u00a0If not, can you suggest how the writer might organize it more efficiently and effectively?\u00a0Explain why you are confused and offer suggestions to the writer on how to make it less ambiguous.<\/p>\r\n<p style=\"padding-left: 60px\">o Has the writer constructed a strong thesis or introduction?\u00a0Why?\u00a0How could the writer make a stronger thesis or introduction? (Remember, a strong thesis\/introduction makes a specific claim. It is not too broad or general. It should be more than a simple statement of fact. It should do more than reiterate common knowledge or restate what already seems clear or obvious to most readers).<\/p>\r\n<p style=\"padding-left: 60px\">o Is the writer\u2019s perspective an <i><em style=\"font-weight: inherit\">informed perspective<\/em><\/i>, one that seems to have emerged after thoughtful consideration of the topic(s) and examination of the ideas surrounding the issue(s)?\u00a0What in the writer\u2019s paper leads you to your conclusion?<\/p>\r\n\r\n<ol start=\"2\">\r\n \t<li>Once you have completed your response\/post, repeat this process with another\u00a0classmate's essay.\u00a0Do this process until you've read and responded to all of your classmates' essays (those in your group) that are not your own.<\/li>\r\n<\/ol>","rendered":"<p><b><strong style=\"font-style: inherit\">\u00a0Peer Exchange (Compare\/Contrast Essay)<\/strong><\/b><\/p>\n<p><b><strong style=\"font-style: inherit\">Directions:<\/strong><\/b><b><strong style=\"font-style: inherit\">\u00a0<\/strong><\/b><\/p>\n<ol>\n<li>\u00a0You have been assigned into groups of 4-5 people. You will have to post a copy of the 1st draft of your compare\/contrast essay in the discussion forum to allow other students to read it.\u00a0Once you do this, please begin reading your other classmates&#8217; essays and do the following:<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: inherit;font-style: inherit\">Edit the paper for any mistakes\/errors you see.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: inherit;font-style: inherit\">Read deeply and carefully for content, while \u201ccorrecting,\u201d and create a written response (post it as a reply in the discussion forum) for the author that addresses at least two of the following questions\/suggestions:<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 60px\">o In what ways has the writer deepened your thinking or caused you to think differently about the topic (or some aspect of the topic)?<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 60px\">o Are there any other \u201cpoints\u201d\/\u201cparts\u201d that you could see being useful to the writer?\u00a0When you look at the subject matter chosen by the writer, how do you see them being of benefit?\u00a0Where would they fit in?<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 60px\">o Did the writer organize his\/her essay in a logical manner (one-side-at-a-time or point-by-point)?\u00a0If not, can you suggest how the writer might organize it more efficiently and effectively?\u00a0Explain why you are confused and offer suggestions to the writer on how to make it less ambiguous.<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 60px\">o Has the writer constructed a strong thesis or introduction?\u00a0Why?\u00a0How could the writer make a stronger thesis or introduction? (Remember, a strong thesis\/introduction makes a specific claim. It is not too broad or general. It should be more than a simple statement of fact. It should do more than reiterate common knowledge or restate what already seems clear or obvious to most readers).<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 60px\">o Is the writer\u2019s perspective an <i><em style=\"font-weight: inherit\">informed perspective<\/em><\/i>, one that seems to have emerged after thoughtful consideration of the topic(s) and examination of the ideas surrounding the issue(s)?\u00a0What in the writer\u2019s paper leads you to your conclusion?<\/p>\n<ol start=\"2\">\n<li>Once you have completed your response\/post, repeat this process with another\u00a0classmate&#8217;s essay.\u00a0Do this process until you&#8217;ve read and responded to all of your classmates&#8217; essays (those in your group) that are not your own.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n\n\t\t\t <section class=\"citations-section\" role=\"contentinfo\">\n\t\t\t <h3>Candela Citations<\/h3>\n\t\t\t\t\t <div>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t <div id=\"citation-list-118\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t <div class=\"licensing\"><div class=\"license-attribution-dropdown-subheading\">CC licensed content, Original<\/div><ul class=\"citation-list\"><li>Peer Exchange - Getting Feedback from Others. <strong>Authored by<\/strong>: Jason Brown. <strong>Provided by<\/strong>: Herkimer College. <strong>Project<\/strong>: AtD OER Course. <strong>License<\/strong>: <em><a target=\"_blank\" rel=\"license\" href=\"https:\/\/creativecommons.org\/licenses\/by\/4.0\/\">CC BY: Attribution<\/a><\/em><\/li><\/ul><\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t <\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t <\/div>\n\t\t\t <\/section>","protected":false},"author":8219,"menu_order":6,"template":"","meta":{"_candela_citation":"[{\"type\":\"original\",\"description\":\"Peer Exchange - Getting Feedback from Others\",\"author\":\"Jason Brown\",\"organization\":\"Herkimer College\",\"url\":\"\",\"project\":\"AtD OER Course\",\"license\":\"cc-by\",\"license_terms\":\"\"}]","CANDELA_OUTCOMES_GUID":"","pb_show_title":"on","pb_short_title":"","pb_subtitle":"","pb_authors":[],"pb_section_license":"cc-by"},"chapter-type":[],"contributor":[],"license":[55],"class_list":["post-118","chapter","type-chapter","status-publish","hentry","license-cc-by"],"part":25,"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/atd-herkimer-collegewriting\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/chapters\/118","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/atd-herkimer-collegewriting\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/chapters"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/atd-herkimer-collegewriting\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/chapter"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/atd-herkimer-collegewriting\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/8219"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/atd-herkimer-collegewriting\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/chapters\/118\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":119,"href":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/atd-herkimer-collegewriting\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/chapters\/118\/revisions\/119"}],"part":[{"href":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/atd-herkimer-collegewriting\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/parts\/25"}],"metadata":[{"href":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/atd-herkimer-collegewriting\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/chapters\/118\/metadata\/"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/atd-herkimer-collegewriting\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=118"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"chapter-type","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/atd-herkimer-collegewriting\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/chapter-type?post=118"},{"taxonomy":"contributor","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/atd-herkimer-collegewriting\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/contributor?post=118"},{"taxonomy":"license","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/atd-herkimer-collegewriting\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/license?post=118"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}