{"id":51,"date":"2017-01-30T17:18:30","date_gmt":"2017-01-30T17:18:30","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/suny-hccc-college-writing-1\/?post_type=chapter&#038;p=51"},"modified":"2017-05-16T14:00:41","modified_gmt":"2017-05-16T14:00:41","slug":"5%c2%b6e-what-is-the-5-paragraph-essay","status":"publish","type":"chapter","link":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/atd-herkimer-collegewriting\/chapter\/5%c2%b6e-what-is-the-5-paragraph-essay\/","title":{"raw":"5\u00b6E - What is the 5 Paragraph Essay?","rendered":"5\u00b6E &#8211; What is the 5 Paragraph Essay?"},"content":{"raw":"<span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\">You may not know what I mean when I say 5 Paragraph Essay, but even if the name is unfamiliar, the concepts of it are probably something you recall doing often in your prior education. \u00a0In short, it is an essay where the following format was used:<\/span>\r\n<ol>\r\n \t<li><span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\">Intro Paragraph (with a thesis statement in the last sentence or two...sometimes underlined)<\/span><\/li>\r\n \t<li><span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\">Body #1 (the first point of the larger subject that you will address and likely mentioned in the thesis)<\/span><\/li>\r\n \t<li><span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\">Body #2 (the second point of the larger subject that you will address and likely mentioned in the thesis)<\/span><\/li>\r\n \t<li><span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\">Body #3 (the third point of the larger subject that you will address and likely mentioned in the thesis)<\/span><\/li>\r\n \t<li><span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\">Conclusion (reiterate what you have already written and restate the thesis)<\/span><\/li>\r\n<\/ol>\r\n<span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\">Does this look familiar now? \u00a0Most of you probably used it extensively throughout high school (if that was your last educational experience) regardless of the subject\/class you were in. \u00a0It was likely a catch-all and worked for any and all subject matters from history to social studies. \u00a0The question is whether this same format will work in college. \u00a0The following are notes to consider as to the merits and\/or downfalls of this familiar essay format:<\/span>\r\n\r\n<strong><span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\">5\u00b6E\u00a0(Five Paragraph Essay)<\/span><\/strong>\r\n<div style=\"text-align: center\">\r\n\r\n<span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\">\u00a0<\/span>\r\n<table style=\"width: 921px;height: 222px\" border=\"1\" cellspacing=\"0\" cellpadding=\"0\" align=\"center\">\r\n<tbody>\r\n<tr valign=\"middle\">\r\n<td style=\"width: 324px;margin-left: 120px\" align=\"left\" valign=\"middle\"><span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\"><b style=\"font-size: medium\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline\"><span style=\"line-height: 18.4px\">Pros<\/span><\/span><\/b><\/span><\/td>\r\n<td style=\"width: 324px;margin-left: 120px\" align=\"left\" valign=\"middle\"><b style=\"font-size: medium;font-style: inherit;text-decoration: underline\"><span style=\"line-height: 115%\">Cons<\/span><\/b><\/td>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<tr>\r\n<td style=\"width: 324px;margin-left: 120px\" align=\"left\" valign=\"middle\">\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li style=\"list-style-type: none\">\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li><span style=\"font-size: medium;font-family: terminal, monaco\"><span style=\"line-height: 115%\">Helps you stay organized<\/span><\/span><\/li>\r\n \t<li><span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\"><span style=\"line-height: 115%\">Easy\/familiar<\/span><\/span><\/li>\r\n \t<li><span style=\"font-size: medium;font-family: terminal, monaco\"><span style=\"line-height: 115%\">Helps create proficiency<\/span><\/span><\/li>\r\n \t<li><span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\"><span style=\"line-height: 115%\">Good format for timed tests since it\u2019s structured and formulaic<\/span><\/span><\/li>\r\n \t<li><span style=\"font-size: medium;font-family: terminal, monaco\"><span style=\"line-height: 115%\">Aids in student survival because it\u2019s familiar and often utilized in prior education<\/span><\/span><\/li>\r\n \t<li><span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\"><span style=\"line-height: 115%\">Helps teachers move through papers with efficiency<\/span><\/span><\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<\/td>\r\n<td style=\"width: 324px;margin-left: 120px\" align=\"left\" valign=\"middle\">\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li style=\"list-style-type: none\">\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li><span style=\"font-size: medium;font-family: terminal, monaco\"><span style=\"line-height: 115%\">Too short in length and thinking<\/span><\/span><\/li>\r\n \t<li><span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\"><span style=\"line-height: 115%\">Only offers limited information\/thinking on even the most difficult of topics<\/span><\/span><\/li>\r\n \t<li><span style=\"font-size: medium;font-family: terminal, monaco\"><span style=\"line-height: 115%\">Extremely predictable and leads to a set of thoughts that are obvious and clich\u00e9<\/span><\/span><\/li>\r\n \t<li><span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\"><span style=\"line-height: 115%\">Because it\u2019s formulaic in nature, student\u2019s grade is dependent upon filling in the blanks correctly and teacher\u2019s adherence to this structure<\/span>\r\n<\/span><\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<\/td>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<\/tbody>\r\n<\/table>\r\n<\/div>\r\n<p style=\"text-align: center\"><span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\r\n<strong><span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\">Two missing, most important factors which are integral and necessary in all good writing:<\/span><\/strong>\r\n\r\n<strong><span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\">\u00a0<\/span><\/strong>\r\n\r\n<strong><span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\">AUDIENCE<\/span><\/strong>\r\n\r\n<strong><span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\">To whom are you writing?<\/span><\/strong>\r\n\r\n<strong><span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\">\u00a0<\/span><\/strong>\r\n\r\n<strong><span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\">PURPOSE<\/span><\/strong>\r\n\r\n<strong><span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\">Why are you writing?<\/span><\/strong>\r\n\r\n<span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\">\r\nThe Five Paragraph Essay is devoid of any consideration of <strong>AUDIENCE<\/strong> and <strong>PURPOSE<\/strong> since the audience is always the teacher and the purpose largely revolves around getting a good grade by pleasing the teacher.\u00a0 The idea that you are writing to a teacher for a grade is not realistic in real world writing and will not likely work for all of your paper assignments in college.\u00a0 That said, you need not abandon ship on it all together, but there is a real likelihood that it will not work in all instances, even in academic settings.\u00a0 <strong>AUDIENCE <\/strong>and <strong>PURPOSE<\/strong> are key in all quality writing and the Five Paragraph Essay does not account for these.\u00a0 If one considers these two factors, it can help shape how you approach writing and how the structure will unfold.\u00a0 To demonstrate, consider the following:<\/span>\r\n\r\n<span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\"><strong>1) You're writing an email to a friend asking him\/her to come visit this weekend.<\/strong><\/span>\r\n\r\n<span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\"><strong>2) You got pulled over recently and you're writing a letter to the judge to ask for clemency.<\/strong><\/span>\r\n\r\n<span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\">What would both of these writing instances sound\/look like?\u00a0 Would the tone and structure be the same for each of these instances?\u00a0 The Five Paragraph Essay assumes they would, and thus you should be able to switch out the writing in each situation.\u00a0 Do you think you'd write a formal email to your friend or an informal letter to the judge?\u00a0 This is why <strong>AUDIENCE<\/strong> and\u00a0<strong>PURPOSE<\/strong> are so important to succeeding in writing.<\/span>\r\n\r\n<span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\">\u00a0<\/span>\r\n\r\n<span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\">\u00a0<\/span>","rendered":"<p><span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\">You may not know what I mean when I say 5 Paragraph Essay, but even if the name is unfamiliar, the concepts of it are probably something you recall doing often in your prior education. \u00a0In short, it is an essay where the following format was used:<\/span><\/p>\n<ol>\n<li><span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\">Intro Paragraph (with a thesis statement in the last sentence or two&#8230;sometimes underlined)<\/span><\/li>\n<li><span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\">Body #1 (the first point of the larger subject that you will address and likely mentioned in the thesis)<\/span><\/li>\n<li><span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\">Body #2 (the second point of the larger subject that you will address and likely mentioned in the thesis)<\/span><\/li>\n<li><span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\">Body #3 (the third point of the larger subject that you will address and likely mentioned in the thesis)<\/span><\/li>\n<li><span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\">Conclusion (reiterate what you have already written and restate the thesis)<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\">Does this look familiar now? \u00a0Most of you probably used it extensively throughout high school (if that was your last educational experience) regardless of the subject\/class you were in. \u00a0It was likely a catch-all and worked for any and all subject matters from history to social studies. \u00a0The question is whether this same format will work in college. \u00a0The following are notes to consider as to the merits and\/or downfalls of this familiar essay format:<\/span><\/p>\n<p><strong><span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\">5\u00b6E\u00a0(Five Paragraph Essay)<\/span><\/strong><\/p>\n<div style=\"text-align: center\">\n<p><span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<table style=\"width: 921px;height: 222px; border-spacing: 0px; margin: auto;\" cellpadding=\"0\">\n<tbody>\n<tr valign=\"middle\">\n<td style=\"width: 324px;margin-left: 120px\" align=\"left\" valign=\"middle\"><span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\"><b style=\"font-size: medium\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline\"><span style=\"line-height: 18.4px\">Pros<\/span><\/span><\/b><\/span><\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 324px;margin-left: 120px\" align=\"left\" valign=\"middle\"><b style=\"font-size: medium;font-style: inherit;text-decoration: underline\"><span style=\"line-height: 115%\">Cons<\/span><\/b><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 324px;margin-left: 120px\" align=\"left\" valign=\"middle\">\n<ul>\n<li style=\"list-style-type: none\">\n<ul>\n<li><span style=\"font-size: medium;font-family: terminal, monaco\"><span style=\"line-height: 115%\">Helps you stay organized<\/span><\/span><\/li>\n<li><span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\"><span style=\"line-height: 115%\">Easy\/familiar<\/span><\/span><\/li>\n<li><span style=\"font-size: medium;font-family: terminal, monaco\"><span style=\"line-height: 115%\">Helps create proficiency<\/span><\/span><\/li>\n<li><span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\"><span style=\"line-height: 115%\">Good format for timed tests since it\u2019s structured and formulaic<\/span><\/span><\/li>\n<li><span style=\"font-size: medium;font-family: terminal, monaco\"><span style=\"line-height: 115%\">Aids in student survival because it\u2019s familiar and often utilized in prior education<\/span><\/span><\/li>\n<li><span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\"><span style=\"line-height: 115%\">Helps teachers move through papers with efficiency<\/span><\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 324px;margin-left: 120px\" align=\"left\" valign=\"middle\">\n<ul>\n<li style=\"list-style-type: none\">\n<ul>\n<li><span style=\"font-size: medium;font-family: terminal, monaco\"><span style=\"line-height: 115%\">Too short in length and thinking<\/span><\/span><\/li>\n<li><span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\"><span style=\"line-height: 115%\">Only offers limited information\/thinking on even the most difficult of topics<\/span><\/span><\/li>\n<li><span style=\"font-size: medium;font-family: terminal, monaco\"><span style=\"line-height: 115%\">Extremely predictable and leads to a set of thoughts that are obvious and clich\u00e9<\/span><\/span><\/li>\n<li><span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\"><span style=\"line-height: 115%\">Because it\u2019s formulaic in nature, student\u2019s grade is dependent upon filling in the blanks correctly and teacher\u2019s adherence to this structure<\/span><br \/>\n<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<\/div>\n<p style=\"text-align: center\"><span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: medium\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><strong><span style=\"font-family: terminal, monaco;font-size: 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