{"id":269,"date":"2019-12-07T11:40:34","date_gmt":"2019-12-07T11:40:34","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/coreqenglish1\/chapter\/outcome-drafting-2-5\/"},"modified":"2025-03-18T22:43:07","modified_gmt":"2025-03-18T22:43:07","slug":"outcome-drafting-2-5","status":"publish","type":"chapter","link":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/englishcomp1\/chapter\/outcome-drafting-2-5\/","title":{"raw":"Introduction to Drafting","rendered":"Introduction to Drafting"},"content":{"raw":"<h2>What you'll learn to do: evaluate drafting techniques<\/h2>\r\n<blockquote>\r\n<p class=\"p1\">Writing is a way to end up thinking something you couldn\u2019t have started out thinking.<\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p1\">\u2014Peter Elbow, <em>Writing Without Teachers<\/em><\/p>\r\n<\/blockquote>\r\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s2\"><img class=\"wp-image-659 size-medium alignright\" src=\"https:\/\/s3-us-west-2.amazonaws.com\/courses-images\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/106\/2016\/06\/01150428\/Draft-300x284.png\" alt=\"&quot;Draft&quot; bullet list: first, working, final. \" width=\"300\" height=\"284\" \/>According to English Professor and author Peter Elbow, the best way to accomplish deep thinking\u00a0is through a series of drafts that come together to produce an emerging \u201ccenter of gravity\u201d that then translates into the main focus on the work. This process should be a holistic process, not a linear process. Elbow\u2019s reasoning behind this concept of multiple drafts follows the idea that, \u201cif [a writer]\u00a0learns to maximize the interaction among his own ideas or points of view, he can produce new ones that didn\u2019t seem available to him.\u201d<\/span><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p1\">In other words, it's difficult to predict where your thoughts and your argument will\u00a0end up when working on an essay draft. And that's a good thing. This is the reason that writing assignments\u00a0are so common in higher education: they develop a deep level of thinking that's only possible\u00a0through this process.<\/p>","rendered":"<h2>What you&#8217;ll learn to do: evaluate drafting techniques<\/h2>\n<blockquote>\n<p class=\"p1\">Writing is a way to end up thinking something you couldn\u2019t have started out thinking.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\">\u2014Peter Elbow, <em>Writing Without Teachers<\/em><\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s2\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"wp-image-659 size-medium alignright\" src=\"https:\/\/s3-us-west-2.amazonaws.com\/courses-images\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/106\/2016\/06\/01150428\/Draft-300x284.png\" alt=\"&quot;Draft&quot; bullet list: first, working, final.\" width=\"300\" height=\"284\" \/>According to English Professor and author Peter Elbow, the best way to accomplish deep thinking\u00a0is through a series of drafts that come together to produce an emerging \u201ccenter of gravity\u201d that then translates into the main focus on the work. This process should be a holistic process, not a linear process. Elbow\u2019s reasoning behind this concept of multiple drafts follows the idea that, \u201cif [a writer]\u00a0learns to maximize the interaction among his own ideas or points of view, he can produce new ones that didn\u2019t seem available to him.\u201d<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\">In other words, it&#8217;s difficult to predict where your thoughts and your argument will\u00a0end up when working on an essay draft. And that&#8217;s a good thing. This is the reason that writing assignments\u00a0are so common in higher education: they develop a deep level of thinking that&#8217;s only possible\u00a0through this process.<\/p>\n\n\t\t\t <section class=\"citations-section\" role=\"contentinfo\">\n\t\t\t <h3>Candela Citations<\/h3>\n\t\t\t\t\t <div>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t <div id=\"citation-list-269\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t <div class=\"licensing\"><div class=\"license-attribution-dropdown-subheading\">CC licensed content, Original<\/div><ul class=\"citation-list\"><li>Outcome: Drafting. <strong>Provided by<\/strong>: Lumen Learning. <strong>License<\/strong>: <em><a target=\"_blank\" rel=\"license\" href=\"https:\/\/creativecommons.org\/licenses\/by-sa\/4.0\/\">CC BY-SA: Attribution-ShareAlike<\/a><\/em><\/li><li>Image of draft. <strong>Authored by<\/strong>: Kim Louie for Lumen Learning. <strong>License<\/strong>: <em><a target=\"_blank\" rel=\"license\" href=\"https:\/\/creativecommons.org\/licenses\/by\/4.0\/\">CC BY: Attribution<\/a><\/em><\/li><\/ul><div class=\"license-attribution-dropdown-subheading\">CC licensed content, Shared previously<\/div><ul class=\"citation-list\"><li>Draft document. <strong>Provided by<\/strong>: Wikipedia. <strong>Located at<\/strong>: <a target=\"_blank\" href=\"https:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/Draft_document\">https:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/Draft_document<\/a>. <strong>License<\/strong>: <em><a target=\"_blank\" rel=\"license\" href=\"https:\/\/creativecommons.org\/licenses\/by-sa\/4.0\/\">CC BY-SA: Attribution-ShareAlike<\/a><\/em><\/li><\/ul><\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t <\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t <\/div>\n\t\t\t <\/section>","protected":false},"author":29,"menu_order":15,"template":"","meta":{"_candela_citation":"[{\"type\":\"cc\",\"description\":\"Draft document\",\"author\":\"\",\"organization\":\"Wikipedia\",\"url\":\"https:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/Draft_document\",\"project\":\"\",\"license\":\"cc-by-sa\",\"license_terms\":\"\"},{\"type\":\"original\",\"description\":\"Outcome: Drafting\",\"author\":\"\",\"organization\":\"Lumen Learning\",\"url\":\"\",\"project\":\"\",\"license\":\"cc-by-sa\",\"license_terms\":\"\"},{\"type\":\"original\",\"description\":\"Image of draft\",\"author\":\"Kim Louie for Lumen Learning\",\"organization\":\"\",\"url\":\"\",\"project\":\"\",\"license\":\"cc-by\",\"license_terms\":\"\"}]","CANDELA_OUTCOMES_GUID":"67671180-49f0-459d-bc37-e13fd20facae","pb_show_title":"on","pb_short_title":"","pb_subtitle":"","pb_authors":[],"pb_section_license":""},"chapter-type":[],"contributor":[],"license":[],"class_list":["post-269","chapter","type-chapter","status-publish","hentry"],"part":240,"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/englishcomp1\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/chapters\/269","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/englishcomp1\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/chapters"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/englishcomp1\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/chapter"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/englishcomp1\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/29"}],"version-history":[{"count":9,"href":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/englishcomp1\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/chapters\/269\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":6492,"href":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/englishcomp1\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/chapters\/269\/revisions\/6492"}],"part":[{"href":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/englishcomp1\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/parts\/240"}],"metadata":[{"href":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/englishcomp1\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/chapters\/269\/metadata\/"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/englishcomp1\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=269"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"chapter-type","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/englishcomp1\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/chapter-type?post=269"},{"taxonomy":"contributor","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/englishcomp1\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/contributor?post=269"},{"taxonomy":"license","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/englishcomp1\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/license?post=269"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}