{"id":5312,"date":"2022-04-06T18:26:36","date_gmt":"2022-04-06T18:26:36","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/englishcomp1\/?post_type=chapter&#038;p=5312"},"modified":"2025-03-31T18:49:21","modified_gmt":"2025-03-31T18:49:21","slug":"module-7-discussion-cares-peer-review","status":"web-only","type":"chapter","link":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/englishcomp1\/chapter\/module-7-discussion-cares-peer-review\/","title":{"raw":"Module 7 Discussion: CARES Peer Review","rendered":"Module 7 Discussion: CARES Peer Review"},"content":{"raw":"<article class=\"w-full text-token-text-primary focus-visible:outline-2 focus-visible:outline-offset-[-4px]\" dir=\"auto\" data-testid=\"conversation-turn-5\" data-scroll-anchor=\"true\">\r\n<div class=\"text-base my-auto mx-auto py-[18px] px-6\">\r\n<div class=\"mx-auto flex flex-1 text-base gap-4 md:gap-5 lg:gap-6 md:max-w-3xl\">\r\n<div class=\"group\/conversation-turn relative flex w-full min-w-0 flex-col agent-turn @xs\/thread:px-0 @sm\/thread:px-1.5 @md\/thread:px-4\">\r\n<div class=\"flex-col gap-1 md:gap-3\">\r\n<div class=\"flex max-w-full flex-col flex-grow\">\r\n<div class=\"min-h-8 text-message relative flex w-full flex-col items-end gap-2 whitespace-normal break-words text-start [.text-message+&amp;]:mt-5\" dir=\"auto\" data-message-author-role=\"assistant\" data-message-id=\"82443a94-75b6-428e-8d2f-e513c631357f\" data-message-model-slug=\"gpt-4o\">\r\n<div class=\"flex w-full flex-col gap-1 empty:hidden first:pt-[3px]\">\r\n<div class=\"markdown prose w-full break-words dark:prose-invert dark\">\r\n<p data-start=\"0\" data-end=\"206\" data-is-last-node=\"\" data-is-only-node=\"\">In this discussion, you will submit a draft of your essay for peer review, provide constructive feedback using the CARES framework, and engage in a collaborative revision process to strengthen your writing.<\/p>\r\n\r\n<h2 data-start=\"0\" data-end=\"206\">Discussion Instructions<\/h2>\r\n<\/div>\r\n<\/div>\r\n<\/div>\r\n<\/div>\r\n<\/div>\r\n<\/div>\r\n<\/div>\r\n<\/div>\r\n<\/article>\r\n<p class=\"p2\"><b>STEP 1<\/b>: First, post the draft of your essay to the discussion forum.<\/p>\r\n\r\n<ol>\r\n \t<li>Copy and paste your draft in a new Google Doc.\u00a0If you aren\u2019t familiar with Google Docs, review this\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/support.google.com\/drive\/bin\/answer.py?hl=en&amp;answer=143206&amp;topic=21008&amp;rd=1\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">resource by Google<\/a>\u00a0to assist you.<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Title the Google Doc with your first initial, last name, and essay name, ex. \u201cRSmith Narrative Essay.\u201d<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Set the share and edit permissions of the Google Doc to \u201cAnyone with the link.\u201d<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Copy and paste the URL address of the Google Doc into a new discussion post.<\/li>\r\n<\/ol>\r\n<p class=\"p2\"><b>STEP 2<\/b>:\u00a0Click on another student\u2019s post (that has no other reviews) and complete a review of their essay, using the following template. Remember to be courteous, helpful, and clear. Use the\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/support.google.com\/docs\/answer\/6033474?co=GENIE.Platform%3DDesktop&amp;hl=en\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Suggest Edits<\/a>\u00a0mode to mark up the essay. Make at least five notes or comments within the essay.<\/p>\r\nAt the bottom of the essay, and again inside the discussion forum, write responses to the following CARES peer review components.\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li><strong>C: Congratulate.<\/strong>\u00a0What does the writer do well in this assignment? (List one or more aspects.) Also, please write the writer\u2019s main claim or focus (thesis) according to what you have read. (It may not be the last sentence of the first paragraph \u2013 the traditional place for the thesis.)<\/li>\r\n \t<li><strong>A: Ask clarifying questions.<\/strong>\u00a0What part(s) of the essay were a bit confusing? Why? What specific suggestions (3 or fewer) do you have for revising the unclear parts of this writing?<\/li>\r\n \t<li><strong>R: Request\u00a0<\/strong>more.\u00a0What would you like to know more about the topic that can enhance the essay and that supports the thesis?<\/li>\r\n \t<li><strong>E: Evaluate<\/strong>\u00a0its value. What specific detail(s) do not work with the essay (e.g. doesn\u2019t support the thesis) or can be moved within the essay?<\/li>\r\n \t<li><strong>S: Summarize.<\/strong>\u00a0Overall, what new information have you learned or how are you thinking differently after this reading?<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<p class=\"p3\"><span style=\"color: #077fab; font-size: 1.15em; font-weight: 600;\">Rubric<\/span><\/p>\r\n\r\n<table><caption>Sample Grading Rubric<\/caption>\r\n<tbody>\r\n<tr>\r\n<th scope=\"col\"><strong>Criteria<\/strong><\/th>\r\n<th scope=\"col\"><strong>Proficient<\/strong><\/th>\r\n<th scope=\"col\"><strong>Developing<\/strong><\/th>\r\n<th scope=\"col\"><strong>Not Evident<\/strong><\/th>\r\n<th scope=\"col\"><strong>Points<\/strong><\/th>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<tr>\r\n<td>Follows prompt directions<\/td>\r\n<td>Follows the prompt instructions.<\/td>\r\n<td>Somewhat follows the prompt instructions. Examples may incomplete.<\/td>\r\n<td>Does not follow the instructions.<\/td>\r\n<td>__\/10<\/td>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<tr>\r\n<td>Responds to peers<\/td>\r\n<td>Response is engaged with peer's post. Posts on time.<\/td>\r\n<td>Response is somewhat engaged with peer's post. Post is short and\/or late.<\/td>\r\n<td>Does not follow the instructions.<\/td>\r\n<td>__\/10<\/td>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<tr>\r\n<th colspan=\"4\" scope=\"row\"><strong>Total:<\/strong><\/th>\r\n<td>__\/20<\/td>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<\/tbody>\r\n<\/table>","rendered":"<article class=\"w-full text-token-text-primary focus-visible:outline-2 focus-visible:outline-offset-[-4px]\" dir=\"auto\" data-testid=\"conversation-turn-5\" data-scroll-anchor=\"true\">\n<div class=\"text-base my-auto mx-auto py-[18px] px-6\">\n<div class=\"mx-auto flex flex-1 text-base gap-4 md:gap-5 lg:gap-6 md:max-w-3xl\">\n<div class=\"group\/conversation-turn relative flex w-full min-w-0 flex-col agent-turn @xs\/thread:px-0 @sm\/thread:px-1.5 @md\/thread:px-4\">\n<div class=\"flex-col gap-1 md:gap-3\">\n<div class=\"flex max-w-full flex-col flex-grow\">\n<div class=\"min-h-8 text-message relative flex w-full flex-col items-end gap-2 whitespace-normal break-words text-start [.text-message+&amp;]:mt-5\" dir=\"auto\" data-message-author-role=\"assistant\" data-message-id=\"82443a94-75b6-428e-8d2f-e513c631357f\" data-message-model-slug=\"gpt-4o\">\n<div class=\"flex w-full flex-col gap-1 empty:hidden first:pt-[3px]\">\n<div class=\"markdown prose w-full break-words dark:prose-invert dark\">\n<p data-start=\"0\" data-end=\"206\" data-is-last-node=\"\" data-is-only-node=\"\">In this discussion, you will submit a draft of your essay for peer review, provide constructive feedback using the CARES framework, and engage in a collaborative revision process to strengthen your writing.<\/p>\n<h2 data-start=\"0\" data-end=\"206\">Discussion Instructions<\/h2>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/article>\n<p class=\"p2\"><b>STEP 1<\/b>: First, post the draft of your essay to the discussion forum.<\/p>\n<ol>\n<li>Copy and paste your draft in a new Google Doc.\u00a0If you aren\u2019t familiar with Google Docs, review this\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/support.google.com\/drive\/bin\/answer.py?hl=en&amp;answer=143206&amp;topic=21008&amp;rd=1\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">resource by Google<\/a>\u00a0to assist you.<\/li>\n<li>Title the Google Doc with your first initial, last name, and essay name, ex. \u201cRSmith Narrative Essay.\u201d<\/li>\n<li>Set the share and edit permissions of the Google Doc to \u201cAnyone with the link.\u201d<\/li>\n<li>Copy and paste the URL address of the Google Doc into a new discussion post.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<p class=\"p2\"><b>STEP 2<\/b>:\u00a0Click on another student\u2019s post (that has no other reviews) and complete a review of their essay, using the following template. Remember to be courteous, helpful, and clear. Use the\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/support.google.com\/docs\/answer\/6033474?co=GENIE.Platform%3DDesktop&amp;hl=en\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Suggest Edits<\/a>\u00a0mode to mark up the essay. Make at least five notes or comments within the essay.<\/p>\n<p>At the bottom of the essay, and again inside the discussion forum, write responses to the following CARES peer review components.<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><strong>C: Congratulate.<\/strong>\u00a0What does the writer do well in this assignment? (List one or more aspects.) Also, please write the writer\u2019s main claim or focus (thesis) according to what you have read. (It may not be the last sentence of the first paragraph \u2013 the traditional place for the thesis.)<\/li>\n<li><strong>A: Ask clarifying questions.<\/strong>\u00a0What part(s) of the essay were a bit confusing? Why? What specific suggestions (3 or fewer) do you have for revising the unclear parts of this writing?<\/li>\n<li><strong>R: Request\u00a0<\/strong>more.\u00a0What would you like to know more about the topic that can enhance the essay and that supports the thesis?<\/li>\n<li><strong>E: Evaluate<\/strong>\u00a0its value. What specific detail(s) do not work with the essay (e.g. doesn\u2019t support the thesis) or can be moved within the essay?<\/li>\n<li><strong>S: Summarize.<\/strong>\u00a0Overall, what new information have you learned or how are you thinking differently after this reading?<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p class=\"p3\"><span style=\"color: #077fab; font-size: 1.15em; font-weight: 600;\">Rubric<\/span><\/p>\n<table>\n<caption>Sample Grading Rubric<\/caption>\n<tbody>\n<tr>\n<th scope=\"col\"><strong>Criteria<\/strong><\/th>\n<th scope=\"col\"><strong>Proficient<\/strong><\/th>\n<th scope=\"col\"><strong>Developing<\/strong><\/th>\n<th scope=\"col\"><strong>Not Evident<\/strong><\/th>\n<th scope=\"col\"><strong>Points<\/strong><\/th>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td>Follows prompt directions<\/td>\n<td>Follows the prompt instructions.<\/td>\n<td>Somewhat follows the prompt instructions. 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