{"id":2929,"date":"2018-07-12T12:32:03","date_gmt":"2018-07-12T12:32:03","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/suny-esc-wm-englishcomposition1\/?post_type=chapter&#038;p=2929"},"modified":"2025-02-04T17:39:10","modified_gmt":"2025-02-04T17:39:10","slug":"revision-summary","status":"publish","type":"chapter","link":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/suny-esc-englishcomposition1-2\/chapter\/revision-summary\/","title":{"raw":"Revision Summary","rendered":"Revision Summary"},"content":{"raw":"This video discusses what to consider as you revise an essay.\r\n\r\n[embed]https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/watch?v=ZWQD-0ynWf0[\/embed]\r\n\r\nThis video discusses what revision is and how it differs from editing and proofreading.\r\n\r\n[embed]https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/watch?v=TnDCMnn2ONc[\/embed]\r\n\r\n&nbsp;\r\n\r\n<img class=\"size-medium wp-image-2016 aligncenter\" src=\"https:\/\/s3-us-west-2.amazonaws.com\/courses-images\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/5269\/2020\/06\/22204550\/stop-sign-with-hand-300x300.png\" alt=\"Stop Here\" width=\"300\" height=\"300\" \/>\r\n<h2 style=\"text-align: center;\"><strong>Read <a href=\"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/suny-esc-englishcomposition1-2\/chapter\/sarahs-essay-in-process-2\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Sarah's Essay in Process <\/a><\/strong><\/h2>\r\n<h2 style=\"text-align: center;\"><strong>STOP HERE\u00a0 and go back to the course, Week 4<\/strong><\/h2>\r\n<h2 style=\"text-align: center;\"><\/h2>\r\n<h2 style=\"text-align: center;\"><\/h2>\r\n&nbsp;","rendered":"<p>This video discusses what to consider as you revise an essay.<\/p>\n<p><iframe loading=\"lazy\" id=\"oembed-1\" title=\"Revising Essays\" width=\"500\" height=\"281\" src=\"https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/embed\/ZWQD-0ynWf0?feature=oembed&#38;rel=0\" frameborder=\"0\" allowfullscreen=\"allowfullscreen\"><\/iframe><\/p>\n<p>This video discusses what revision is and how it differs from editing and proofreading.<\/p>\n<p><iframe loading=\"lazy\" id=\"oembed-2\" title=\"Revising, Editing, Proofreading: What&#39;s the Difference?\" width=\"500\" height=\"375\" src=\"https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/embed\/TnDCMnn2ONc?feature=oembed&#38;rel=0\" frameborder=\"0\" allowfullscreen=\"allowfullscreen\"><\/iframe><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"size-medium wp-image-2016 aligncenter\" src=\"https:\/\/s3-us-west-2.amazonaws.com\/courses-images\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/5269\/2020\/06\/22204550\/stop-sign-with-hand-300x300.png\" alt=\"Stop Here\" width=\"300\" height=\"300\" \/><\/p>\n<h2 style=\"text-align: center;\"><strong>Read <a href=\"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/suny-esc-englishcomposition1-2\/chapter\/sarahs-essay-in-process-2\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Sarah&#8217;s Essay in Process <\/a><\/strong><\/h2>\n<h2 style=\"text-align: center;\"><strong>STOP HERE\u00a0 and go back to the course, Week 4<\/strong><\/h2>\n<h2 style=\"text-align: center;\"><\/h2>\n<h2 style=\"text-align: center;\"><\/h2>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\t\t\t <section class=\"citations-section\" role=\"contentinfo\">\n\t\t\t <h3>Candela Citations<\/h3>\n\t\t\t\t\t <div>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t <div id=\"citation-list-2929\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t <div class=\"licensing\"><div class=\"license-attribution-dropdown-subheading\">All rights reserved content<\/div><ul class=\"citation-list\"><li>video Revising, Editing, and Proofreading. <strong>Provided by<\/strong>: MiraCosta Writing Center. <strong>Located at<\/strong>: <a target=\"_blank\" href=\"https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/watch?v=TnDCMnn2ONc\">https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/watch?v=TnDCMnn2ONc<\/a>. <strong>License<\/strong>: <em>Other<\/em>. <strong>License Terms<\/strong>: Standard YouTube License<\/li><li>video Revising Essays. <strong>Authored by<\/strong>: Laura K. 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