Structuring Support: Patterns of Organization

You can figure out an organic order of information appropriate to the ideas in your topic sentences and units of support. Or you may want to use a more standard pattern of organization IF that pattern fits the type of thought you have developed in your support.  These patterns mirror the ways in which humans think about their worlds and organize their thoughts in order to communicate.

Some basic patterns—and ways of ordering support in an essay—include the following:

Pro/Con

You often think in terms of pros and cons when you analyze the merits or characteristics of a thing, person, or idea (e.g., buying a new refrigerator, whom to vote for, whether you’re in favor of or against an increase in school taxes). An essay using a pro/con structure does not necessarily just have two topic sentences, one for pro and one for con. Instead, you may need to structure multiple pro/con topic sentences and units of support to fit your needs. You may want to present pros and cons equally, with multiple topic sentences and units of support for each side. You may opt to focus more fully on either pros or cons, and so would have many topic sentences for the side you emphasize. You may want to address particular points and alternate between pros and cons. Organize your topic sentences and units of support in a way that makes sense given your thesis and purpose.

Problem/Solution

Articulating a problem and offering a solution/s is also a common human thought process (e.g., how to keep the deer from eating out of your garden, how to juggle working from home and homeschooling your children during a pandemic). An essay using a problem/solution pattern usually starts with a topic sentence and unit of support that presents the problem. Then there may be many topic sentences and units of support that analyze and evaluate different possible solutions or that present many aspects of one overall solution.

    

Process

An essay using a process pattern is often straightforward, as it usually presents a series of steps in chronological order. However, a college essay that uses a process pattern needs to offer more than a list of steps. College writing about a process needs to make a point about that process (e.g., Baking bread, while relatively simple, still involves a number of complexities, variables, and just plain things that can go wrong.). And each topic sentence needs to make a point about that portion of the process. Ideally, a college essay that uses process analysis should emphasize “analysis” as well as “process” by explaining the importance of the steps, their relationship to one another, and/or their use in solving a problem. Process analysis in college essays, while using a relatively simple organizational structure, should involve some depth of thought.

Comparison and Contrast

Comparison and contrast is a thought process that you most likely have gone through many times (e.g., how do these two makes of car compare? which dessert is the best to bring to the party? how can my two children be so different?) In college writing, you may be asked to compare or contrast two theories, concepts, approaches, etc. in order to show similarities or differences and evaluate each. Note the repetition of the word “two.” Comparison and contrast pattern evaluates two things against one another. Also note the repetition of the word “evaluate.” As you compare and contrast, you’ll be expected not only to describe the characteristics of the two things, theories, concepts, or approaches, but also to offer some assessment or analysis, as part of your thesis’ and topic sentences’ angles and supporting evidence.

There are two different, equally useful, organizational patterns for comparison and contrast:

  1. Side by side – Offer all of the information for one thing first before moving to the second. However, within each side, structure the points of comparison/contrast in the same order. With side by side structure, you may end up with only two topic sentences, or you may end up with general topic sentences to introduce each side, and then a series of more specific topic sentences for each point.
  2. Point by point – Deal with each point of the comparison/contrast in an order that makes sense given the two things being compared. However, under each point, the same side always needs to come first.
Chart showing hierarchy; Top element=Thesis; branching from Thesis are "Side 1 Topic Sentence" and "Side 2 Topic Sentence"; branching from each side's topic sentence are "Point 1," "Point 2" and "Point 3"
Diagram of Point by Point pattern: Begin with Thesis; branching from there are "Point 1 Topic Sentence," "Point 2 Topic Sentence" and "Point 3 Topic Sentence": branching from each point are "Side 1" and "Side 2"

Division and Classification

When you divide and classify, you break something down into its component parts, offering an insight or analysis into the thing you’re breaking down. You actually use division and classification thinking a lot, perhaps without realizing it (e.g., different personality types of the people you know, different types of cars, different types of activities for your children). Remember that when using this pattern of organization, you still have to create a thesis sentence that offers an analytical insight (e.g., Of all the sixteen personality types that Myers-Briggs identify, the ___ type is the best to hire in a ___ type of job, for a number of reasons.) Your then have topic sentences and units of support for each group or class. The topic sentences themselves should have angles that relate back to the main angle in the thesis.

Cause and Effect

Cause and effect is just what it says. Writing about causes and effects deals with identifying “reasons why” and/or “results.” The important thing to remember is that this pattern calls for logical inference in dealing with causes, and logical probabilities in explaining effects. Don’t fall into a logical fallacy by assuming simple and/or incorrect causation. Instead, make sure that you link causes and effects carefully, considering both evidence and probability. As usual, your thesis, topic sentences, and units of support should show some complexity and offer insights into causes and/or effects, insights which you developed based on your reading.

    

View the following video for a good summary of patterns of organization. Toward the end, the video includes five sample paragraphs so that you can self-test your ability to recognize different patterns of organization as a reader. Considering patterns of organization as a reader will also give you insight into how to apply them as a writer.

Final Thoughts on Structuring Support/Patterns of Organization

  • Sometimes understanding a pattern can help you circle back and develop support. For example, if you’re comparing two items in a side by side comparison, you may realize that you do not have parallel information for each side and need to circle back to developing additional support.
  • It’s important to remember, though, that you should not force-fit your thoughts and your support into a pattern. Patterns should be organic to your thesis and purpose for writing.
  • A clear organizational structure helps your reader follow and understand your thoughts, whether or not the reader is conscious of the structure you used. You experienced that yourself as a reader when you read articles in which ideas were presented clearly and logically.
  • Finally and most importantly, keep in mind that you need to review your topic sentences and units of support and make conscious choices about their order. You should be able to articulate your rationale for structuring your support in a certain way.

 

Exercises

Review the short article “How Crisco Toppled Lard.”

  • What overall pattern of organization does the author use for the whole article?
  • What pattern/s of organization does the author use specifically in the section on King Crisco?