{"id":584,"date":"2016-07-01T19:52:52","date_gmt":"2016-07-01T19:52:52","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/waymaker-level3-english\/?post_type=chapter&#038;p=584"},"modified":"2016-10-06T20:24:57","modified_gmt":"2016-10-06T20:24:57","slug":"video-drafting","status":"publish","type":"chapter","link":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/suny-fmcc-engcomp1-2\/chapter\/video-drafting\/","title":{"raw":"Drafting","rendered":"Drafting"},"content":{"raw":"Just as the line between \"organizing\" and \"drafting\" can be blurry, so to can the line between \"first draft,\" \"second draft,\" \"final draft.\" There's often no hard stop between multiple versions of an essay, but rather a continual rolling improvement process. That's why the term <strong>working draft<\/strong> is much more useful than numbering a specific draft. 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