{"id":181,"date":"2017-04-07T00:54:00","date_gmt":"2017-04-07T00:54:00","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/suny-fmcc-english1\/?post_type=chapter&#038;p=181"},"modified":"2017-07-24T23:02:30","modified_gmt":"2017-07-24T23:02:30","slug":"outcome-revising","status":"publish","type":"chapter","link":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/suny-fmcc-english1\/chapter\/outcome-revising\/","title":{"raw":"Outcome: Revising","rendered":"Outcome: Revising"},"content":{"raw":"<div class=\"textbox learning-objectives\">\r\n<h3>Learning Objectives<\/h3>\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li>Evaluate the process of seeking input on writing from others<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Evaluate and apply strategies for incorporating personal and external editorial comments<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Evaluate and apply methods for re-seeing a piece of writing<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Evaluate higher order concerns for revision<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<\/div>\r\n<h2>Evaluate revision activities<\/h2>\r\nTo revisit our metaphor of the writing process as a journey, turning to the act of revision means a huge accomplishment: we've arrived at our destination! A draft is complete, and we have a solid understanding of\u00a0our subject matter. The act of revision will allow us to explore what's possible now that we've arrived--how we can shape our own adventure in this location.\r\n\r\nA powerful visualization of drafting and editing can be found this video, which captures a day in a life of a painter. Painting, like writing, is a hugely creative act, and one that undergoes many drafts. You'll see this artist rough out big ideas, and then wipe them out. These false starts are not uncommon, but note how he keeps going after it. After a series of dramatic changes to the canvas in the first few minutes, the final couple of minutes focus the changes to a smaller and smaller scale: it becomes a process of refinement towards the end.\r\n\r\nhttps:\/\/youtu.be\/7SHuq7PGIeI\r\n\r\n(This video has no voice-over but does use the song <a href=\"http:\/\/www.lyricsmania.com\/over_and_over_lyrics_hot_chip.html\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">\"Over and Over\" by Hot Chip<\/a> as a soundtrack.)\r\n\r\nBy this stage in your writing process, you likely won't be wiping your canvas clean and starting from scratch. Instead, it's time to clarify, refine, and reorganize to make sure the big picture is exactly what you want it to be. <img class=\"aligncenter wp-image-404\" src=\"https:\/\/s3-us-west-2.amazonaws.com\/courses-images\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/1705\/2017\/04\/06215033\/Revise-300x284.png\" alt=\"Graphic titled Revise. Bullet list: re-see, align structure, align thesis. All is in an orange circle bordered by gray arrows.\" width=\"600\" height=\"568\" \/>","rendered":"<div class=\"textbox learning-objectives\">\n<h3>Learning Objectives<\/h3>\n<ul>\n<li>Evaluate the process of seeking input on writing from others<\/li>\n<li>Evaluate and apply strategies for incorporating personal and external editorial comments<\/li>\n<li>Evaluate and apply methods for re-seeing a piece of writing<\/li>\n<li>Evaluate higher order concerns for revision<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/div>\n<h2>Evaluate revision activities<\/h2>\n<p>To revisit our metaphor of the writing process as a journey, turning to the act of revision means a huge accomplishment: we&#8217;ve arrived at our destination! A draft is complete, and we have a solid understanding of\u00a0our subject matter. The act of revision will allow us to explore what&#8217;s possible now that we&#8217;ve arrived&#8211;how we can shape our own adventure in this location.<\/p>\n<p>A powerful visualization of drafting and editing can be found this video, which captures a day in a life of a painter. Painting, like writing, is a hugely creative act, and one that undergoes many drafts. You&#8217;ll see this artist rough out big ideas, and then wipe them out. These false starts are not uncommon, but note how he keeps going after it. After a series of dramatic changes to the canvas in the first few minutes, the final couple of minutes focus the changes to a smaller and smaller scale: it becomes a process of refinement towards the end.<\/p>\n<p><iframe loading=\"lazy\" id=\"oembed-1\" title=\"Hot Chip - Over and Over (Painting Process)\" width=\"500\" height=\"375\" src=\"https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/embed\/7SHuq7PGIeI?feature=oembed&#38;rel=0\" frameborder=\"0\" allowfullscreen=\"allowfullscreen\"><\/iframe><\/p>\n<p>(This video has no voice-over but does use the song <a href=\"http:\/\/www.lyricsmania.com\/over_and_over_lyrics_hot_chip.html\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">&#8220;Over and Over&#8221; by Hot Chip<\/a> as a soundtrack.)<\/p>\n<p>By this stage in your writing process, you likely won&#8217;t be wiping your canvas clean and starting from scratch. Instead, it&#8217;s time to clarify, refine, and reorganize to make sure the big picture is exactly what you want it to be. <img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-404\" src=\"https:\/\/s3-us-west-2.amazonaws.com\/courses-images\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/1705\/2017\/04\/06215033\/Revise-300x284.png\" alt=\"Graphic titled Revise. Bullet list: re-see, align structure, align thesis. 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