{"id":224,"date":"2017-04-07T00:53:58","date_gmt":"2017-04-07T00:53:58","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/suny-fmcc-english1\/?post_type=chapter&#038;p=224"},"modified":"2017-07-18T21:30:55","modified_gmt":"2017-07-18T21:30:55","slug":"audience","status":"publish","type":"chapter","link":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/suny-fmcc-english1\/chapter\/audience\/","title":{"raw":"Audience","rendered":"Audience"},"content":{"raw":"<h2 class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\"><b>Audience matters <\/b><\/span><\/h2>\r\n<p class=\"p2\"><span class=\"s1\">When you\u2019re in the process of writing a paper, it\u2019s easy to forget that you are actually writing to someone. Whether you\u2019ve thought about it consciously or not, you always write to an audience: sometimes your audience is a very generalized group of readers, sometimes you know the individuals who compose the audience, and sometimes you write for yourself. Keeping your audience in mind while you write can help you make good decisions about what material to include, how to organize your ideas, and how best to support your argument. <\/span><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p2\"><span class=\"s1\">To illustrate the impact of audience, imagine you\u2019re writing a letter to your grandmother to tell her about your first month of college. What details and stories might you include? What might you leave out? Now imagine that you\u2019re writing on the same topic but your audience is your best friend. Unless you have an extremely cool grandma to whom you\u2019re very close, it\u2019s likely that your two letters would look quite different in terms of content, structure, and even tone. <\/span><\/p>\r\n\r\n<h2 class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\"><b>Isn\u2019t my instructor my audience? <\/b><\/span><\/h2>\r\n<p class=\"p2\"><span class=\"s1\">Yes, your instructor or TA is probably the actual audience for your paper. Your instructors read and grade your essays, and you want to keep their needs and perspectives in mind when you write. However, when you write an essay with only your instructor in mind, you might not say as much as you should or say it as clearly as you should, because you assume that the person grading it knows more than you do and will fill in the gaps. This leaves it up to the instructor to decide what you are really saying, and she might decide differently than you expect. For example, she might decide that those gaps show that you don\u2019t know and understand the material. Remember that time when you said to yourself, \u201cI don\u2019t have to explain communism; my instructor knows more about that than I do\u201d and got back a paper that said something like \u201cShows no understanding of communism\u201d? That\u2019s an example of what can go awry when you think of your instructor as your only audience. <\/span><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p2\"><span class=\"s1\">Thinking about your audience differently can improve your writing, especially in terms of how clearly you express your argument. The clearer your points are, the more likely you are to have a strong essay. Your instructor will say, \u201cHe really understands communism\u2014he\u2019s able to\u00a0<\/span><span class=\"s1\">explain it simply and clearly!\u201d By treating your instructor as an intelligent but uninformed audience, you end up addressing her more effectively. <\/span><\/p>\r\n\r\n<h2 class=\"p2\"><span class=\"s1\"><b>How do I identify my audience and what they want from me? <\/b><\/span><\/h2>\r\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">Before you even begin the process of writing, take some time to consider who your audience is and what they want from you. Use the following questions to help you identify your audience and what you can do to address their wants and needs. <\/span><\/p>\r\n\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">Who is your audience?<\/span><\/li>\r\n \t<li class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">Might you have more than one audience? If so, how many audiences do you have? List them.<\/span><\/li>\r\n \t<li class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">Does your assignment itself give any clues about your audience?<\/span><\/li>\r\n \t<li class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">What does your audience need? What do they want? What do they value?<\/span><\/li>\r\n \t<li class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">What is most important to them?<\/span><\/li>\r\n \t<li class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">What are they least likely to care about?<\/span><\/li>\r\n \t<li class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">What kind of organization would best help your audience understand and appreciate your? What do you have to say (or what are you doing in your research) that might surprise your audience?<\/span><\/li>\r\n \t<li class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">What do you want your audience to think, learn, or assume about you? What impression do you want your writing or your research to convey? <\/span><\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<h2 class=\"p2\"><span class=\"s1\"><b>How much should I explain? <\/b><\/span><\/h2>\r\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">This is the hard part. As we said earlier, you want to show your instructor that you know the material. But different assignments call for varying degrees of information. Different fields also have different expectations. For more about what each field tends to expect from an essay, see the Writing Center <\/span><a href=\"http:\/\/writingcenter.unc.edu\/handouts\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\"><span class=\"s2\">handouts <\/span><\/a><span class=\"s1\">on writing in specific fields of study. The best place to start figuring out how much you should say about each part of your paper is in a careful reading of the assignment. We give you some tips for reading assignments and figuring them out in our handout on <\/span><span class=\"s2\"><a href=\"http:\/\/writingcenter.unc.edu\/handouts\/understanding-assignments\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">how to read an assignment<\/a><\/span><span class=\"s1\">. The assignment may specify an audience for your paper; sometimes the instructor will ask you to imagine that you are writing to your congressperson, for a professional journal, to a group of specialists in a particular field, or for a group of your peers. If the assignment doesn\u2019t specify an audience, you may find it most useful to imagine your classmates reading the paper, rather than your instructor. <\/span><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">Now, knowing your imaginary audience, what other clues can you get from the assignment? If the assignment asks you to summarize something that you have read, then your reader wants you to include more examples from the text than if the assignment asks you to interpret the passage. Most assignments in college focus on argument rather than the repetition of learned information, so your reader probably doesn\u2019t want a lengthy, detailed, point-by-point summary of your reading (book reports in some classes and argument reconstructions in philosophy classes are big exceptions to this rule). If your assignment asks you to interpret or analyze the text (or an event or idea), then you want to make sure that your explanation of the material is\u00a0<\/span><span class=\"s1\">focused and not so detailed that you end up spending more time on examples than on your analysis. If you are not sure about the difference between explaining something and analyzing it, see our handouts on <\/span><span class=\"s2\"><a href=\"http:\/\/writingcenter.unc.edu\/handouts\/understanding-assignments\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">reading the assignment<\/a> <\/span><span class=\"s1\">and <\/span><span class=\"s2\"><a href=\"http:\/\/writingcenter.unc.edu\/handouts\/argument\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">argument<\/a><\/span><span class=\"s1\">. <\/span><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">Once you have a draft, try your level of explanation out on a friend, a classmate, or a Writing Center tutor. Get the person to read your rough draft, and then ask her to talk to you about what she did and didn\u2019t understand. (Now is not the time to talk about proofreading stuff, so make sure she ignores those issues for the time being). You will likely get one of the following responses or a combination of them: <\/span><\/p>\r\n\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">If your listener\/reader has <b>tons of questions <\/b>about what you are saying, then you probably need to explain more. Let\u2019s say you are writing a paper on piranhas, and your reader says, \u201cWhat\u2019s a piranha? Why do I need to know about them? How would I identify one?\u201d Those are vital questions that you clearly need to answer in your paper. You need more detail and elaboration.<\/span><\/li>\r\n \t<li class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">If your reader seems <b>confused<\/b>, you probably need to explain more clearly. So if he says, \u201cAre there piranhas in the lakes around here?\u201d you may not need to give more examples, but rather focus on making sure your examples and points are clear.<\/span><\/li>\r\n \t<li class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">If your reader <b>looks bored and can repeat back to you more details than she needs to know <\/b>to get your point, you probably explained too much. Excessive detail can also be confusing, because it can bog the reader down and keep her from focusing on your main points. You want your reader to say, \u201cSo it seems like your paper is saying that piranhas are misunderstood creatures that are essential to South American ecosystems,\u201d not, \u201cUh... piranhas are important?\u201d or, \u201cWell, I know you said piranhas don\u2019t usually attack people, and they\u2019re usually around 10 inches long, and some people keep them in aquariums as pets, and dolphins are one of their predators, and...a bunch of other stuff, I guess?\u201d <\/span><\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">Sometimes it\u2019s not the amount of explanation that matters, but the word choice and tone you adopt. Your word choice and tone need to match your audience\u2019s expectations. For example, imagine you are researching piranhas; you find an article in <i>National Geographic <\/i>and another one in an academic journal for scientists. How would you expect the two articles to sound? <i>National Geographic <\/i>is written for a popular audience; you might expect it to have sentences like \u201cThe piranha generally lives in shallow rivers and streams in South America.\u201d The scientific journal, on the other hand, might use much more technical language, because it\u2019s written for an audience of specialists. A sentence like \u201c<i>Serrasalmus piraya <\/i>lives in fresh and brackish intercoastal and proto-arboreal sub-tropical regions between the 45th and 38th parallels\u201d might not be out of place in the journal. <\/span><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">Generally, you want your reader to know enough material to understand the points you are making. It\u2019s like the old forest\/trees metaphor. If you give the reader nothing but trees, she won\u2019t see the forest (your thesis, the reason for your paper). If you give her a big forest and no trees, she won\u2019t know how you got to the forest (she might say, \u201cYour point is fine, but you haven\u2019t proven it to me\u201d). You want the reader to say, \u201cNice forest, and those trees really help me to see it.\u201d Our handout on <\/span><span class=\"s2\"><a href=\"http:\/\/writingcenter.unc.edu\/handouts\/paragraphs\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">paragraph development<\/a> <\/span><span class=\"s1\">can help you find a good balance of\u00a0<\/span><span class=\"s1\">examples and explanation. <\/span><\/p>\r\n\r\n<h2 class=\"p2\"><span class=\"s1\"><b>Reading your own drafts <\/b><\/span><\/h2>\r\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">Writers tend to read over their own papers pretty quickly, with the knowledge of what they are trying to argue already in their minds. Reading in this way can cause you to skip over gaps in your written argument because the gap-filler is in your head. A problem occurs when your reader falls into these gaps. Your reader wants you to make the necessary connections from one thought or sentence to the next. When you don\u2019t, the reader can become confused or frustrated. Think about when you read something and you struggle to find the most important points or what the writer is trying to say. Isn\u2019t that annoying? Doesn\u2019t it make you want to quit reading and surf the web or call a friend? <\/span><\/p>\r\n\r\n<h2 class=\"p2\"><span class=\"s1\"><b>Putting yourself in the reader\u2019s position <\/b><\/span><\/h2>\r\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">Instead of reading your draft as if you wrote it and know what you meant, try reading it as if you have no previous knowledge of the material. Have you explained enough? Are the connections clear? This can be hard to do at first. Consider using one of the following strategies: <\/span><\/p>\r\n\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">Take a break from your work\u2014go work out, take a nap, take a day off. This is why the Writing Center and your instructors encourage you to start writing more than a day before the paper is due. If you write the paper the night before it\u2019s due, you make it almost impossible to read the paper with a fresh eye.<\/span><\/li>\r\n \t<li class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">Try outlining after writing\u2014after you have a draft, look at each paragraph separately. Write down the main point for each paragraph on a separate sheet of paper, in the order you have put them. Then look at your \u201coutline\u201d\u2014does it reflect what you meant to say, in a logical order? Are some paragraphs hard to reduce to one point? Why? This technique will help you find places where you may have confused your reader by straying from your original plan for the paper.<\/span><\/li>\r\n \t<li class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">Read the paper aloud\u2014we do this all the time at the Writing Center, and once you get used to it, you\u2019ll see that it helps you slow down and really consider how your reader experiences your text. It will also help you catch a lot of sentence-level errors, such as misspellings and missing words, which can make it difficult for your reader to focus on your argument. <\/span><\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">These techniques can help you read your paper in the same way your reader will and make revisions that help your reader understand your argument. Then, when your instructor finally reads your finished draft, he or she won\u2019t have to fill in any gaps. The more work you do, the less work your audience will have to do\u2014and the more likely it is that your instructor will follow and understand your argument. <\/span><\/p>","rendered":"<h2 class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\"><b>Audience matters <\/b><\/span><\/h2>\n<p class=\"p2\"><span class=\"s1\">When you\u2019re in the process of writing a paper, it\u2019s easy to forget that you are actually writing to someone. Whether you\u2019ve thought about it consciously or not, you always write to an audience: sometimes your audience is a very generalized group of readers, sometimes you know the individuals who compose the audience, and sometimes you write for yourself. Keeping your audience in mind while you write can help you make good decisions about what material to include, how to organize your ideas, and how best to support your argument. <\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p2\"><span class=\"s1\">To illustrate the impact of audience, imagine you\u2019re writing a letter to your grandmother to tell her about your first month of college. What details and stories might you include? What might you leave out? Now imagine that you\u2019re writing on the same topic but your audience is your best friend. Unless you have an extremely cool grandma to whom you\u2019re very close, it\u2019s likely that your two letters would look quite different in terms of content, structure, and even tone. <\/span><\/p>\n<h2 class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\"><b>Isn\u2019t my instructor my audience? <\/b><\/span><\/h2>\n<p class=\"p2\"><span class=\"s1\">Yes, your instructor or TA is probably the actual audience for your paper. Your instructors read and grade your essays, and you want to keep their needs and perspectives in mind when you write. However, when you write an essay with only your instructor in mind, you might not say as much as you should or say it as clearly as you should, because you assume that the person grading it knows more than you do and will fill in the gaps. This leaves it up to the instructor to decide what you are really saying, and she might decide differently than you expect. For example, she might decide that those gaps show that you don\u2019t know and understand the material. Remember that time when you said to yourself, \u201cI don\u2019t have to explain communism; my instructor knows more about that than I do\u201d and got back a paper that said something like \u201cShows no understanding of communism\u201d? That\u2019s an example of what can go awry when you think of your instructor as your only audience. <\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p2\"><span class=\"s1\">Thinking about your audience differently can improve your writing, especially in terms of how clearly you express your argument. The clearer your points are, the more likely you are to have a strong essay. Your instructor will say, \u201cHe really understands communism\u2014he\u2019s able to\u00a0<\/span><span class=\"s1\">explain it simply and clearly!\u201d By treating your instructor as an intelligent but uninformed audience, you end up addressing her more effectively. <\/span><\/p>\n<h2 class=\"p2\"><span class=\"s1\"><b>How do I identify my audience and what they want from me? <\/b><\/span><\/h2>\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">Before you even begin the process of writing, take some time to consider who your audience is and what they want from you. Use the following questions to help you identify your audience and what you can do to address their wants and needs. <\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">Who is your audience?<\/span><\/li>\n<li class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">Might you have more than one audience? If so, how many audiences do you have? List them.<\/span><\/li>\n<li class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">Does your assignment itself give any clues about your audience?<\/span><\/li>\n<li class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">What does your audience need? What do they want? What do they value?<\/span><\/li>\n<li class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">What is most important to them?<\/span><\/li>\n<li class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">What are they least likely to care about?<\/span><\/li>\n<li class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">What kind of organization would best help your audience understand and appreciate your? What do you have to say (or what are you doing in your research) that might surprise your audience?<\/span><\/li>\n<li class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">What do you want your audience to think, learn, or assume about you? What impression do you want your writing or your research to convey? <\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<h2 class=\"p2\"><span class=\"s1\"><b>How much should I explain? <\/b><\/span><\/h2>\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">This is the hard part. As we said earlier, you want to show your instructor that you know the material. But different assignments call for varying degrees of information. Different fields also have different expectations. For more about what each field tends to expect from an essay, see the Writing Center <\/span><a href=\"http:\/\/writingcenter.unc.edu\/handouts\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\"><span class=\"s2\">handouts <\/span><\/a><span class=\"s1\">on writing in specific fields of study. The best place to start figuring out how much you should say about each part of your paper is in a careful reading of the assignment. We give you some tips for reading assignments and figuring them out in our handout on <\/span><span class=\"s2\"><a href=\"http:\/\/writingcenter.unc.edu\/handouts\/understanding-assignments\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">how to read an assignment<\/a><\/span><span class=\"s1\">. The assignment may specify an audience for your paper; sometimes the instructor will ask you to imagine that you are writing to your congressperson, for a professional journal, to a group of specialists in a particular field, or for a group of your peers. If the assignment doesn\u2019t specify an audience, you may find it most useful to imagine your classmates reading the paper, rather than your instructor. <\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">Now, knowing your imaginary audience, what other clues can you get from the assignment? If the assignment asks you to summarize something that you have read, then your reader wants you to include more examples from the text than if the assignment asks you to interpret the passage. Most assignments in college focus on argument rather than the repetition of learned information, so your reader probably doesn\u2019t want a lengthy, detailed, point-by-point summary of your reading (book reports in some classes and argument reconstructions in philosophy classes are big exceptions to this rule). If your assignment asks you to interpret or analyze the text (or an event or idea), then you want to make sure that your explanation of the material is\u00a0<\/span><span class=\"s1\">focused and not so detailed that you end up spending more time on examples than on your analysis. If you are not sure about the difference between explaining something and analyzing it, see our handouts on <\/span><span class=\"s2\"><a href=\"http:\/\/writingcenter.unc.edu\/handouts\/understanding-assignments\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">reading the assignment<\/a> <\/span><span class=\"s1\">and <\/span><span class=\"s2\"><a href=\"http:\/\/writingcenter.unc.edu\/handouts\/argument\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">argument<\/a><\/span><span class=\"s1\">. <\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">Once you have a draft, try your level of explanation out on a friend, a classmate, or a Writing Center tutor. Get the person to read your rough draft, and then ask her to talk to you about what she did and didn\u2019t understand. (Now is not the time to talk about proofreading stuff, so make sure she ignores those issues for the time being). You will likely get one of the following responses or a combination of them: <\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">If your listener\/reader has <b>tons of questions <\/b>about what you are saying, then you probably need to explain more. Let\u2019s say you are writing a paper on piranhas, and your reader says, \u201cWhat\u2019s a piranha? Why do I need to know about them? How would I identify one?\u201d Those are vital questions that you clearly need to answer in your paper. You need more detail and elaboration.<\/span><\/li>\n<li class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">If your reader seems <b>confused<\/b>, you probably need to explain more clearly. So if he says, \u201cAre there piranhas in the lakes around here?\u201d you may not need to give more examples, but rather focus on making sure your examples and points are clear.<\/span><\/li>\n<li class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">If your reader <b>looks bored and can repeat back to you more details than she needs to know <\/b>to get your point, you probably explained too much. Excessive detail can also be confusing, because it can bog the reader down and keep her from focusing on your main points. You want your reader to say, \u201cSo it seems like your paper is saying that piranhas are misunderstood creatures that are essential to South American ecosystems,\u201d not, \u201cUh&#8230; piranhas are important?\u201d or, \u201cWell, I know you said piranhas don\u2019t usually attack people, and they\u2019re usually around 10 inches long, and some people keep them in aquariums as pets, and dolphins are one of their predators, and&#8230;a bunch of other stuff, I guess?\u201d <\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">Sometimes it\u2019s not the amount of explanation that matters, but the word choice and tone you adopt. Your word choice and tone need to match your audience\u2019s expectations. For example, imagine you are researching piranhas; you find an article in <i>National Geographic <\/i>and another one in an academic journal for scientists. How would you expect the two articles to sound? <i>National Geographic <\/i>is written for a popular audience; you might expect it to have sentences like \u201cThe piranha generally lives in shallow rivers and streams in South America.\u201d The scientific journal, on the other hand, might use much more technical language, because it\u2019s written for an audience of specialists. A sentence like \u201c<i>Serrasalmus piraya <\/i>lives in fresh and brackish intercoastal and proto-arboreal sub-tropical regions between the 45th and 38th parallels\u201d might not be out of place in the journal. <\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">Generally, you want your reader to know enough material to understand the points you are making. It\u2019s like the old forest\/trees metaphor. If you give the reader nothing but trees, she won\u2019t see the forest (your thesis, the reason for your paper). If you give her a big forest and no trees, she won\u2019t know how you got to the forest (she might say, \u201cYour point is fine, but you haven\u2019t proven it to me\u201d). You want the reader to say, \u201cNice forest, and those trees really help me to see it.\u201d Our handout on <\/span><span class=\"s2\"><a href=\"http:\/\/writingcenter.unc.edu\/handouts\/paragraphs\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">paragraph development<\/a> <\/span><span class=\"s1\">can help you find a good balance of\u00a0<\/span><span class=\"s1\">examples and explanation. <\/span><\/p>\n<h2 class=\"p2\"><span class=\"s1\"><b>Reading your own drafts <\/b><\/span><\/h2>\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">Writers tend to read over their own papers pretty quickly, with the knowledge of what they are trying to argue already in their minds. Reading in this way can cause you to skip over gaps in your written argument because the gap-filler is in your head. A problem occurs when your reader falls into these gaps. Your reader wants you to make the necessary connections from one thought or sentence to the next. When you don\u2019t, the reader can become confused or frustrated. Think about when you read something and you struggle to find the most important points or what the writer is trying to say. Isn\u2019t that annoying? Doesn\u2019t it make you want to quit reading and surf the web or call a friend? <\/span><\/p>\n<h2 class=\"p2\"><span class=\"s1\"><b>Putting yourself in the reader\u2019s position <\/b><\/span><\/h2>\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">Instead of reading your draft as if you wrote it and know what you meant, try reading it as if you have no previous knowledge of the material. Have you explained enough? Are the connections clear? This can be hard to do at first. Consider using one of the following strategies: <\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">Take a break from your work\u2014go work out, take a nap, take a day off. This is why the Writing Center and your instructors encourage you to start writing more than a day before the paper is due. If you write the paper the night before it\u2019s due, you make it almost impossible to read the paper with a fresh eye.<\/span><\/li>\n<li class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">Try outlining after writing\u2014after you have a draft, look at each paragraph separately. Write down the main point for each paragraph on a separate sheet of paper, in the order you have put them. Then look at your \u201coutline\u201d\u2014does it reflect what you meant to say, in a logical order? Are some paragraphs hard to reduce to one point? Why? This technique will help you find places where you may have confused your reader by straying from your original plan for the paper.<\/span><\/li>\n<li class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">Read the paper aloud\u2014we do this all the time at the Writing Center, and once you get used to it, you\u2019ll see that it helps you slow down and really consider how your reader experiences your text. It will also help you catch a lot of sentence-level errors, such as misspellings and missing words, which can make it difficult for your reader to focus on your argument. <\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">These techniques can help you read your paper in the same way your reader will and make revisions that help your reader understand your argument. Then, when your instructor finally reads your finished draft, he or she won\u2019t have to fill in any gaps. 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