{"id":2664,"date":"2016-07-12T15:22:11","date_gmt":"2016-07-12T15:22:11","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/waymaker-level1-english\/?post_type=chapter&#038;p=2664"},"modified":"2020-01-20T19:53:39","modified_gmt":"2020-01-20T19:53:39","slug":"assignment-personal-analysis-essay-revision","status":"publish","type":"chapter","link":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/waymaker-level1-english-gen\/chapter\/assignment-personal-analysis-essay-revision\/","title":{"raw":"Assignment: Personal Analysis Essay Revision","rendered":"Assignment: Personal Analysis Essay Revision"},"content":{"raw":"<h2>Personal Analysis Essay Revision Introduction<\/h2>\r\nIn the Writing module, you completed an essay asking you to reflect on your ethical values.\r\n<div class=\"textbox shaded\">In this module, we will revisit that essay, <strong>expanding it to include\u00a0outside sources found through research<\/strong> to\u00a0help illustrate and clarify the points your essay makes.<\/div>\r\n<h2>Assignment Details<\/h2>\r\nThe revised\u00a0essay will be 600-850 words long. \u00a0It will demonstrate a clear, supported thesis statement, strong organizational skills, and attention to proofreading and editing.\r\n\r\nAdditionally, it will incorporate 1-2 credible outside sources to help support the essay's thesis. \u00a0These sources will be cited using MLA in-text citations and the essay will include a MLA Works Cited page.\r\n\r\n&nbsp;\r\n<h2>Rubric<\/h2>\r\nIn order to successfully complete\u00a0this assessment, a submitted essay\u00a0must reach \"Meets or Exceeds Expectations\" in all categories.\r\n<table>\r\n<tbody>\r\n<tr>\r\n<th>Criteria<\/th>\r\n<th><\/th>\r\n<th>Ratings<\/th>\r\n<th><\/th>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<tr>\r\n<td>Thesis Statement<\/td>\r\n<td><strong>Meets or Exceeds Expectations<\/strong>\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li>contains a clearly identifiable thesis statement that drives the essay content, which has been adjusted to fit the new scope of the revision<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<\/td>\r\n<td><strong>Approaching Expectations<\/strong>\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li>contains a thesis statement that relates to most essay content. \u00a0May not have been adjusted to fit the new scope of the revision<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<\/td>\r\n<td><strong>Does Not Meet Expectations<\/strong>\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li>does not contain a thesis statement, <em>or<\/em> thesis statement does not relate to most essay content<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<\/td>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<tr>\r\n<td>Sources<\/td>\r\n<td><strong>Meets or Exceeds Expectations<\/strong>\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li>authoritative, appropriate source(s) included in essay<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<\/td>\r\n<td><strong>Approaching Expectations<\/strong>\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li>source included in essay which may not be relevant or authoritative<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<\/td>\r\n<td><strong>Does Not Meet Expectations<\/strong>\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li>no outside source included in essay<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<\/td>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<tr>\r\n<td>Documentation<\/td>\r\n<td><strong>Meets or Exceeds Expectations<\/strong>\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li>quotations, paraphrases, and\/or summaries are clearly attributed through MLA in-text citation<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Works Cited page follows\u00a0patterns of MLA citation formatting<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<\/td>\r\n<td><strong>Approaching Expectations<\/strong>\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li>quotations, paraphrases, or summaries may not be attributed through MLA in-text citations in all cases<\/li>\r\n \t<li>one or more entries missing on the Works Cited page, or Works Cited page does not follow MLA formatting<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<\/td>\r\n<td><strong>Does Not Meet Expectations<\/strong>\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li>in-text citations and\/or Works Cited page missing<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<\/td>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<tr>\r\n<td>MLA Formatting<\/td>\r\n<td><strong>Meets or Exceeds Expectations<\/strong>\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li>document formatted according to MLA specifications, including four-line header on first page, centered title, and heading on all pages showing last name and page number<\/li>\r\n \t<li>text is double-spaced and uses an appropriate font<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<\/td>\r\n<td><strong>Approaching Expectations<\/strong>\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li>document generally formatted according to MLA specifications,\u00a0but may be missing key elements<\/li>\r\n \t<li>text may not be\u00a0double-spaced or may not\u00a0use an appropriate font<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<\/td>\r\n<td><strong>Does Not Meet Expectations<\/strong>\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li>document not formatted according to MLA specifications<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<\/td>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<tr>\r\n<td>Writing Process<\/td>\r\n<td><strong>Meets or Exceeds Expectations<\/strong>\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li>evidence that higher-order editing concerns have been identified and addressed<\/li>\r\n \t<li>evidence that lower-order proofreading concerns have been identified and addressed, though minor patterns of error might remain<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<\/td>\r\n<td><strong>Approaching Expectations<\/strong>\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li>higher-order editing concerns may not have been addressed<\/li>\r\n \t<li>lower-order editing concerns may not have been addressed. \u00a0Significant patterns of error remain.<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<\/td>\r\n<td><strong>Does Not Meet Expectations<\/strong>\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li>fundamental issues with higher-order editing concerns present in draft<\/li>\r\n \t<li>fundamental issues with lower-order editing concerns present in draft<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<\/td>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<\/tbody>\r\n<\/table>\r\n<h2><\/h2>\r\n<h2>Contribute!<\/h2><div style=\"margin-bottom: 8px;\">Did you have an idea for improving this content? We\u2019d love your input.<\/div><a href=\"https:\/\/docs.google.com\/document\/d\/1oraRM0TR2chVR0RUBDCgL2KazdJixPhnsoXTMADnOpw\" target=\"_blank\" style=\"font-size: 10pt; font-weight: 600; color: #077fab; text-decoration: none; border: 2px solid #077fab; border-radius: 7px; padding: 5px 25px; text-align: center; cursor: pointer; line-height: 1.5em;\">Improve this page<\/a><a style=\"margin-left: 16px;\" target=\"_blank\" href=\"https:\/\/docs.google.com\/document\/d\/1vy-T6DtTF-BbMfpVEI7VP_R7w2A4anzYZLXR8Pk4Fu4\">Learn More<\/a>","rendered":"<h2>Personal Analysis Essay Revision Introduction<\/h2>\n<p>In the Writing module, you completed an essay asking you to reflect on your ethical values.<\/p>\n<div class=\"textbox shaded\">In this module, we will revisit that essay, <strong>expanding it to include\u00a0outside sources found through research<\/strong> to\u00a0help illustrate and clarify the points your essay makes.<\/div>\n<h2>Assignment Details<\/h2>\n<p>The revised\u00a0essay will be 600-850 words long. \u00a0It will demonstrate a clear, supported thesis statement, strong organizational skills, and attention to proofreading and editing.<\/p>\n<p>Additionally, it will incorporate 1-2 credible outside sources to help support the essay&#8217;s thesis. \u00a0These sources will be cited using MLA in-text citations and the essay will include a MLA Works Cited page.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<h2>Rubric<\/h2>\n<p>In order to successfully complete\u00a0this assessment, a submitted essay\u00a0must reach &#8220;Meets or Exceeds Expectations&#8221; in all categories.<\/p>\n<table>\n<tbody>\n<tr>\n<th>Criteria<\/th>\n<th><\/th>\n<th>Ratings<\/th>\n<th><\/th>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td>Thesis Statement<\/td>\n<td><strong>Meets or Exceeds Expectations<\/strong><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>contains a clearly identifiable thesis statement that drives the essay content, which has been adjusted to fit the new scope of the revision<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<td><strong>Approaching Expectations<\/strong><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>contains a thesis statement that relates to most essay content. \u00a0May not have been adjusted to fit the new scope of the revision<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<td><strong>Does Not Meet Expectations<\/strong><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>does not contain a thesis statement, <em>or<\/em> thesis statement does not relate to most essay content<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td>Sources<\/td>\n<td><strong>Meets or Exceeds Expectations<\/strong><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>authoritative, appropriate source(s) included in essay<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<td><strong>Approaching Expectations<\/strong><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>source included in essay which may not be relevant or authoritative<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<td><strong>Does Not Meet Expectations<\/strong><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>no outside source included in essay<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td>Documentation<\/td>\n<td><strong>Meets or Exceeds Expectations<\/strong><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>quotations, paraphrases, and\/or summaries are clearly attributed through MLA in-text citation<\/li>\n<li>Works Cited page follows\u00a0patterns of MLA citation formatting<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<td><strong>Approaching Expectations<\/strong><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>quotations, paraphrases, or summaries may not be attributed through MLA in-text citations in all cases<\/li>\n<li>one or more entries missing on the Works Cited page, or Works Cited page does not follow MLA formatting<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<td><strong>Does Not Meet Expectations<\/strong><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>in-text citations and\/or Works Cited page missing<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td>MLA Formatting<\/td>\n<td><strong>Meets or Exceeds Expectations<\/strong><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>document formatted according to MLA specifications, including four-line header on first page, centered title, and heading on all pages showing last name and page number<\/li>\n<li>text is double-spaced and uses an appropriate font<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<td><strong>Approaching Expectations<\/strong><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>document generally formatted according to MLA specifications,\u00a0but may be missing key elements<\/li>\n<li>text may not be\u00a0double-spaced or may not\u00a0use an appropriate font<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<td><strong>Does Not Meet Expectations<\/strong><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>document not formatted according to MLA specifications<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td>Writing Process<\/td>\n<td><strong>Meets or Exceeds Expectations<\/strong><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>evidence that higher-order editing concerns have been identified and addressed<\/li>\n<li>evidence that lower-order proofreading concerns have been identified and addressed, though minor patterns of error might remain<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<td><strong>Approaching Expectations<\/strong><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>higher-order editing concerns may not have been addressed<\/li>\n<li>lower-order editing concerns may not have been addressed. \u00a0Significant patterns of error remain.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<td><strong>Does Not Meet Expectations<\/strong><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>fundamental issues with higher-order editing concerns present in draft<\/li>\n<li>fundamental issues with lower-order editing concerns present in draft<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<h2><\/h2>\n<h2>Contribute!<\/h2>\n<div style=\"margin-bottom: 8px;\">Did you have an idea for improving this content? 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