{"id":624,"date":"2016-04-06T22:40:25","date_gmt":"2016-04-06T22:40:25","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/waymaker-level1-english\/?post_type=chapter&#038;p=624"},"modified":"2016-07-15T18:25:04","modified_gmt":"2016-07-15T18:25:04","slug":"text-first-drafts","status":"publish","type":"chapter","link":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/waymaker-level1-english-gen\/chapter\/text-first-drafts\/","title":{"raw":"Text: Crappy First Drafts","rendered":"Text: Crappy First Drafts"},"content":{"raw":"Essay assignments are such high-stakes tasks, that we feel a lot of pressure to do serious work, and perform well, at every stage of the writing process. \u00a0Sure, prewriting can be kind of fun, and outlining can get us excited about the possibilities a project can hold.\r\n\r\nAt the time of starting to write a first draft, however, the pressure starts to mount. Sometimes we can feel locked into the need to get everything perfect, that it can be paralyzing.\r\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">The thing to remember is that EVERY first draft is crappy. \u00a0Everyone's.<\/p>\r\n<img class=\"aligncenter wp-image-628 size-full\" src=\"https:\/\/s3-us-west-2.amazonaws.com\/courses-images\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/85\/2016\/04\/06225627\/6952472683_4344119915_z.jpg\" alt=\"Trash can with wadded up paper in and around it\" width=\"640\" height=\"427\" \/>\r\n\r\nConsider this blog post by Melissa Ward:\r\n<div class=\"textbox shaded\">\r\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">\"The first draft of anything is shit.\" \u2014Ernest Hemingway<\/span><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">I should be able to stop here, leaving you with Hemingway's sage and true statement, and go work onto something else, maybe my own shitty first draft of a blog post. But I won't because I know most of you refuse to accept this truth.<\/span><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">No, instead you think if you beat your head against your desk hard enough and long enough, you will craft some 24k golden prose, words so sweet and deftly written that you'll bring tears to the eyes of babes.<\/span><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">Well you won't. So stop it.<\/span><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">Still don't believe me? Are you saying, \"Melissa, how do you know how well I write?\" To this, I say, that doesn't matter. If you can't learn to write a shitty first draft, getting whatever it is out of your system, then you're never going to have the energy to keep writing. You're not going to learn how to take risks, because you'll never let yourself write anything less than perfect on the first go.<\/span><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">FREAKING STOP IT. Write some garbage. Let it spew forth, and once you've finally emptied that stinking pustule, take a step away and come back later. Put on some gloves and dig through the pile you emptied out on those pages, and you'll begin to find some gems. Use them to write a good second draft, and then repeat until you have an excellent final draft.<\/span><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">If you don't believe me, then see what Anne Lamott has to say about it. Lamott's <a href=\"http:\/\/www.amazon.com\/Bird-Some-Instructions-Writing-Life\/dp\/0385480016\" target=\"_blank\"><span class=\"s2\"><i>Bird by Bird: Some Instructions on Writing and Life<\/i><\/span><\/a> has a chapter titled \"Shitty First Drafts.\"\u00a0The book was required reading when I took my short fiction workshop in college, and it's a great book for all writers.<\/span><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">The shitty first draft isn't about encouraging bad writing ... it's about encouraging writing AT ALL. You'll never write a page if you keep stopping yourself within the first sentence or two and rewriting. Free yourself and learn to love the shitty first draft.<\/span><\/p>\r\n\r\n<\/div>\r\n<p class=\"p1\">The crappy first draft can be very liberating. \u00a0If it doesn't have to be good, then we feel a lot more freedom to get started and get it over with.<\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p1\">Trust in the process. \u00a0Write crap. \u00a0Plenty of time later to refine it.<\/p>\r\n<h2>Contribute!<\/h2><div style=\"margin-bottom: 8px;\">Did you have an idea for improving this content? We\u2019d love your input.<\/div><a href=\"https:\/\/docs.google.com\/document\/d\/1gihl5Bqg0wo8FghxWHnk4bStqbJtKcPsVDFpuchTqNo\" target=\"_blank\" style=\"font-size: 10pt; font-weight: 600; color: #077fab; text-decoration: none; border: 2px solid #077fab; border-radius: 7px; padding: 5px 25px; text-align: center; cursor: pointer; line-height: 1.5em;\">Improve this page<\/a><a style=\"margin-left: 16px;\" target=\"_blank\" href=\"https:\/\/docs.google.com\/document\/d\/1vy-T6DtTF-BbMfpVEI7VP_R7w2A4anzYZLXR8Pk4Fu4\">Learn More<\/a>","rendered":"<p>Essay assignments are such high-stakes tasks, that we feel a lot of pressure to do serious work, and perform well, at every stage of the writing process. \u00a0Sure, prewriting can be kind of fun, and outlining can get us excited about the possibilities a project can hold.<\/p>\n<p>At the time of starting to write a first draft, however, the pressure starts to mount. Sometimes we can feel locked into the need to get everything perfect, that it can be paralyzing.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">The thing to remember is that EVERY first draft is crappy. \u00a0Everyone&#8217;s.<\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-628 size-full\" src=\"https:\/\/s3-us-west-2.amazonaws.com\/courses-images\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/85\/2016\/04\/06225627\/6952472683_4344119915_z.jpg\" alt=\"Trash can with wadded up paper in and around it\" width=\"640\" height=\"427\" \/><\/p>\n<p>Consider this blog post by Melissa Ward:<\/p>\n<div class=\"textbox shaded\">\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">&#8220;The first draft of anything is shit.&#8221; \u2014Ernest Hemingway<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">I should be able to stop here, leaving you with Hemingway&#8217;s sage and true statement, and go work onto something else, maybe my own shitty first draft of a blog post. But I won&#8217;t because I know most of you refuse to accept this truth.<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">No, instead you think if you beat your head against your desk hard enough and long enough, you will craft some 24k golden prose, words so sweet and deftly written that you&#8217;ll bring tears to the eyes of babes.<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">Well you won&#8217;t. So stop it.<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">Still don&#8217;t believe me? Are you saying, &#8220;Melissa, how do you know how well I write?&#8221; To this, I say, that doesn&#8217;t matter. If you can&#8217;t learn to write a shitty first draft, getting whatever it is out of your system, then you&#8217;re never going to have the energy to keep writing. You&#8217;re not going to learn how to take risks, because you&#8217;ll never let yourself write anything less than perfect on the first go.<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">FREAKING STOP IT. Write some garbage. Let it spew forth, and once you&#8217;ve finally emptied that stinking pustule, take a step away and come back later. Put on some gloves and dig through the pile you emptied out on those pages, and you&#8217;ll begin to find some gems. Use them to write a good second draft, and then repeat until you have an excellent final draft.<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">If you don&#8217;t believe me, then see what Anne Lamott has to say about it. Lamott&#8217;s <a href=\"http:\/\/www.amazon.com\/Bird-Some-Instructions-Writing-Life\/dp\/0385480016\" target=\"_blank\"><span class=\"s2\"><i>Bird by Bird: Some Instructions on Writing and Life<\/i><\/span><\/a> has a chapter titled &#8220;Shitty First Drafts.&#8221;\u00a0The book was required reading when I took my short fiction workshop in college, and it&#8217;s a great book for all writers.<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">The shitty first draft isn&#8217;t about encouraging bad writing &#8230; it&#8217;s about encouraging writing AT ALL. You&#8217;ll never write a page if you keep stopping yourself within the first sentence or two and rewriting. Free yourself and learn to love the shitty first draft.<\/span><\/p>\n<\/div>\n<p class=\"p1\">The crappy first draft can be very liberating. \u00a0If it doesn&#8217;t have to be good, then we feel a lot more freedom to get started and get it over with.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\">Trust in the process. \u00a0Write crap. \u00a0Plenty of time later to refine it.<\/p>\n<h2>Contribute!<\/h2>\n<div style=\"margin-bottom: 8px;\">Did you have an idea for improving this content? 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