{"id":696,"date":"2016-04-11T14:33:06","date_gmt":"2016-04-11T14:33:06","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/waymaker-level1-english\/?post_type=chapter&#038;p=696"},"modified":"2020-01-20T19:52:25","modified_gmt":"2020-01-20T19:52:25","slug":"try-it-revising","status":"publish","type":"chapter","link":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/waymaker-level1-english-gen\/chapter\/try-it-revising\/","title":{"raw":"Try It: Revising","rendered":"Try It: Revising"},"content":{"raw":"<h2>Revising Activity<\/h2>\r\n<div class=\"textbox exercises\">\r\n<h3>To Do<\/h3>\r\n<ol>\r\n \t<li><img class=\"alignright wp-image-426\" src=\"https:\/\/s3-us-west-2.amazonaws.com\/courses-images\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/85\/2016\/03\/31221324\/6880225956_2111dbe381_z.jpg\" alt=\"Photo of four hands holding red pencils at each corner of the photo, so that a square is formed in the central negative space\" width=\"119\" height=\"119\" \/>Write answers to all questions found on the <a href=\".\/chapter\/text-higher-order-concerns\/\" target=\"_blank\">Higher Order Concerns<\/a> page of the text.<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Reflect on what your answers tell you about what aspects of your essay still need to be addressed.\u00a0Complete a second draft that satisfies all the higher order concerns raised by that reflection.<\/li>\r\n<\/ol>\r\n<\/div>\r\n&nbsp;\r\n<h2>Contribute!<\/h2><div style=\"margin-bottom: 8px;\">Did you have an idea for improving this content? 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