{"id":939,"date":"2016-04-14T15:58:10","date_gmt":"2016-04-14T15:58:10","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/waymaker-level1-english\/?post_type=chapter&#038;p=939"},"modified":"2017-01-24T18:07:33","modified_gmt":"2017-01-24T18:07:33","slug":"outcome-sentence-structure-4-7","status":"publish","type":"chapter","link":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/waymaker-level1-english-gen\/chapter\/outcome-sentence-structure-4-7\/","title":{"raw":"Outcome: Sentence Structure","rendered":"Outcome: Sentence Structure"},"content":{"raw":"<h2>Identify Common Sentence Types and Common Errors in Sentence Composition<\/h2>\r\nIt's important to have variety in your sentence length and structure. This quote\u00a0from\u00a0Gary Provost illustrates why:\r\n<blockquote>This sentence has five words. Here are five more words. Five-word sentences are fine. But several together become monotonous. Listen to what is happening. The writing is getting boring. The sound of it drones. It's like a stuck record. The ear demands some variety. Now listen. I vary the sentence length, and I create music. Music. The writing sings. It has a pleasant rhythm, a lilt, a harmony. I use short sentences. And I use sentences of medium length. And sometimes when I am certain the reader is rested, I will engage him with a sentence of considerable length, a sentence that burns with energy and builds with all the impetus of a crescendo, the roll of the drums, the crash of the cymbals--sounds that say listen to this, it is important.\r\n\r\nSo write with a combination of short, medium, and long sentences. Create a sound that pleases the reader's ear. Don't just write words. Write music.[footnote]Provost, Gary. <i>100 Ways to Improve Your Writing<\/i>,\u00a0Signet:1985, pp. 60\u201361.[\/footnote]<\/blockquote>\r\nYou can also listen to the difference in the video below:\r\n\r\nhttps:\/\/youtu.be\/k7ccnFw84cQ\r\n\r\nIn order to create this variety, you need to know how sentences work and how to create them. In this outcome we will\u00a0identify the parts of sentences and learn how they fit together to create music in writing.\r\n<h2>What You Will Learn to Do<\/h2>\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li>identify common sentence structures<\/li>\r\n \t<li>identify sentence punctuation patterns<\/li>\r\n \t<li>identify run-on sentences<\/li>\r\n \t<li>identify sentence fragments<\/li>\r\n \t<li>identify parallel structure<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<h2>Contribute!<\/h2><div style=\"margin-bottom: 8px;\">Did you have an idea for improving this content? We\u2019d love your input.<\/div><a href=\"https:\/\/docs.google.com\/document\/d\/1JknZa650hnZ85o9uVgVHk5F0fo0zi8CZwjHxBtMrfKI\" target=\"_blank\" style=\"font-size: 10pt; font-weight: 600; color: #077fab; text-decoration: none; border: 2px solid #077fab; border-radius: 7px; padding: 5px 25px; text-align: center; cursor: pointer; line-height: 1.5em;\">Improve this page<\/a><a style=\"margin-left: 16px;\" target=\"_blank\" href=\"https:\/\/docs.google.com\/document\/d\/1vy-T6DtTF-BbMfpVEI7VP_R7w2A4anzYZLXR8Pk4Fu4\">Learn More<\/a>","rendered":"<h2>Identify Common Sentence Types and Common Errors in Sentence Composition<\/h2>\n<p>It&#8217;s important to have variety in your sentence length and structure. This quote\u00a0from\u00a0Gary Provost illustrates why:<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>This sentence has five words. Here are five more words. Five-word sentences are fine. But several together become monotonous. Listen to what is happening. The writing is getting boring. The sound of it drones. It&#8217;s like a stuck record. The ear demands some variety. Now listen. I vary the sentence length, and I create music. Music. The writing sings. It has a pleasant rhythm, a lilt, a harmony. I use short sentences. And I use sentences of medium length. And sometimes when I am certain the reader is rested, I will engage him with a sentence of considerable length, a sentence that burns with energy and builds with all the impetus of a crescendo, the roll of the drums, the crash of the cymbals&#8211;sounds that say listen to this, it is important.<\/p>\n<p>So write with a combination of short, medium, and long sentences. Create a sound that pleases the reader&#8217;s ear. Don&#8217;t just write words. Write music.<a class=\"footnote\" title=\"Provost, Gary. 100 Ways to Improve Your Writing,\u00a0Signet:1985, pp. 60\u201361.\" id=\"return-footnote-939-1\" href=\"#footnote-939-1\" aria-label=\"Footnote 1\"><sup class=\"footnote\">[1]<\/sup><\/a><\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>You can also listen to the difference in the video below:<\/p>\n<p><iframe loading=\"lazy\" id=\"oembed-1\" title=\"This Sentence Has Five Words\" width=\"500\" height=\"281\" src=\"https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/embed\/k7ccnFw84cQ?feature=oembed&#38;rel=0\" frameborder=\"0\" allowfullscreen=\"allowfullscreen\"><\/iframe><\/p>\n<p>In order to create this variety, you need to know how sentences work and how to create them. In this outcome we will\u00a0identify the parts of sentences and learn how they fit together to create music in writing.<\/p>\n<h2>What You Will Learn to Do<\/h2>\n<ul>\n<li>identify common sentence structures<\/li>\n<li>identify sentence punctuation patterns<\/li>\n<li>identify run-on sentences<\/li>\n<li>identify sentence fragments<\/li>\n<li>identify parallel structure<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<h2>Contribute!<\/h2>\n<div style=\"margin-bottom: 8px;\">Did you have an idea for improving this content? We\u2019d love your input.<\/div>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/docs.google.com\/document\/d\/1JknZa650hnZ85o9uVgVHk5F0fo0zi8CZwjHxBtMrfKI\" target=\"_blank\" style=\"font-size: 10pt; font-weight: 600; color: #077fab; text-decoration: none; border: 2px solid #077fab; border-radius: 7px; padding: 5px 25px; text-align: center; cursor: pointer; line-height: 1.5em;\">Improve this page<\/a><a style=\"margin-left: 16px;\" target=\"_blank\" href=\"https:\/\/docs.google.com\/document\/d\/1vy-T6DtTF-BbMfpVEI7VP_R7w2A4anzYZLXR8Pk4Fu4\">Learn More<\/a><\/p>\n\n\t\t\t <section class=\"citations-section\" role=\"contentinfo\">\n\t\t\t <h3>Candela Citations<\/h3>\n\t\t\t\t\t <div>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t <div id=\"citation-list-939\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t <div class=\"licensing\"><div class=\"license-attribution-dropdown-subheading\">CC licensed content, Original<\/div><ul class=\"citation-list\"><li>Outcome: Sentence Structure. <strong>Provided by<\/strong>: Lumen Learning. <strong>License<\/strong>: <em><a target=\"_blank\" rel=\"license\" href=\"https:\/\/creativecommons.org\/licenses\/by\/4.0\/\">CC BY: Attribution<\/a><\/em><\/li><\/ul><div class=\"license-attribution-dropdown-subheading\">All rights reserved content<\/div><ul class=\"citation-list\"><li>This Sentence Has Five Words. <strong>Authored by<\/strong>: Nick Schneider. <strong>Located at<\/strong>: <a target=\"_blank\" href=\"https:\/\/youtu.be\/k7ccnFw84cQ\">https:\/\/youtu.be\/k7ccnFw84cQ<\/a>. <strong>License<\/strong>: <em>All Rights Reserved<\/em>. <strong>License Terms<\/strong>: Standard YouTube License<\/li><\/ul><\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t <\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t <\/div>\n\t\t\t <\/section><hr class=\"before-footnotes clear\" \/><div class=\"footnotes\"><ol><li id=\"footnote-939-1\">Provost, Gary. <i>100 Ways to Improve Your Writing<\/i>,\u00a0Signet:1985, pp. 60\u201361. <a href=\"#return-footnote-939-1\" class=\"return-footnote\" aria-label=\"Return to footnote 1\">&crarr;<\/a><\/li><\/ol><\/div>","protected":false},"author":17,"menu_order":53,"template":"","meta":{"_candela_citation":"[{\"type\":\"copyrighted_video\",\"description\":\"This Sentence Has Five Words\",\"author\":\"Nick Schneider\",\"organization\":\"\",\"url\":\"https:\/\/youtu.be\/k7ccnFw84cQ\",\"project\":\"\",\"license\":\"arr\",\"license_terms\":\"Standard YouTube License\"},{\"type\":\"original\",\"description\":\"Outcome: Sentence Structure\",\"author\":\"\",\"organization\":\"Lumen Learning\",\"url\":\"\",\"project\":\"\",\"license\":\"cc-by\",\"license_terms\":\"\"}]","CANDELA_OUTCOMES_GUID":"747b6653-4091-40aa-8864-564246ce70f9","pb_show_title":"on","pb_short_title":"","pb_subtitle":"","pb_authors":[],"pb_section_license":""},"chapter-type":[],"contributor":[],"license":[],"class_list":["post-939","chapter","type-chapter","status-publish","hentry"],"part":21,"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/waymaker-level1-english-gen\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/chapters\/939","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/waymaker-level1-english-gen\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/chapters"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/waymaker-level1-english-gen\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/chapter"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/waymaker-level1-english-gen\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/17"}],"version-history":[{"count":9,"href":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/waymaker-level1-english-gen\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/chapters\/939\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":3086,"href":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/waymaker-level1-english-gen\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/chapters\/939\/revisions\/3086"}],"part":[{"href":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/waymaker-level1-english-gen\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/parts\/21"}],"metadata":[{"href":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/waymaker-level1-english-gen\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/chapters\/939\/metadata\/"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/waymaker-level1-english-gen\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=939"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"chapter-type","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/waymaker-level1-english-gen\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/chapter-type?post=939"},{"taxonomy":"contributor","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/waymaker-level1-english-gen\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/contributor?post=939"},{"taxonomy":"license","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/courses.lumenlearning.com\/waymaker-level1-english-gen\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/license?post=939"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}