Working Thesis Statements

Thesis Statement Basics

The following video offers a writing instructor’s perspective about how fundamental a thesis statement is to organizing an effective persuasive, researched essay. While he talks about many aspects of a thesis, it particularly stresses the flexibility you’re allowed while writing, revising, and revisiting a thesis many times as you build an essay.

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Thesis Analysis

The Writing Center at The University of North Carolina Chapel Hill offers these questions to consider as you examine the effectiveness of a thesis statement. It’s effective strategy to revisit these questions several times throughout the writing process, to measure how well your thesis serves your project as it continues to grow and evolve.

  • What is your general topic or what problem area are you interested in? How would you express it in a few words?
  • What central question are you trying to answer about your topic?
  • What do you think is the best answer to your central question? From your research so far, what have you concluded? What is your main point about your topic?
  • In one sentence, how would you describe your findings to someone who asked you about your research?
  • How does your idea differ from other views you have read? What do you have to say about your topic that is new? 
  • Ask why? And how? Of what seems like a thesis statement when it begins to emerge. What relationship exists between the ideas you are describing? For example, are you suggesting that one idea causes another? Contradicts another? Subsumes another?