- Analyze the types and uses of evidence and supporting details in paragraphs
Thesis in Action
In the previous activity, we saw a thesis that contained all of the parts of the argument. Each paragraph of the essay related exactly to one claim in the thesis (this is fairly typical for 5-paragraph style). This structure was useful for illustrating how the paragraphs in an academic essay support the thesis claim. However, most of the essays you read in college won’t have such a clear one-to-one match between thesis and paragraphs!
Let’s look at a thesis statement in the wild.
This example comes from a 2001 article by Gerald Graff called “Hidden Intellectualism.” Graff opens up the essay with a description of Michael Warner’s essay “Tongues Untied: Memoirs of a Pentecostal Boyhood,” which tells the story of Warner’s “improbable journey from an upbringing in a Christian Pentecostal [very religious] family and graduation from Oral Roberts University to his current identity as a ‘queer atheist intellectual.'” In his memoir, Warner points out that although the academic world often views religious fundamentalism as “anti-intellectual,” his Pentecostal upbringing actually prepared him well for his academic journey by introducing him to a life “saturated by argument.” Graff then uses Warner’s memoir to make a point about “intellectualism” more generally. This point is the thesis of Graff’s essay:
Writer’s Workshop: Thesis and Argument
Let’s look at how the thesis statement introduces and ties together the argument of an essay.
Open your Working Document and write the heading “Thesis and Argument”
- Cut-and-paste in this thesis claim: “There must be many buried or hidden forms of intellectualism that do not get channeled into academic work but might if schools were more alert about tapping into them. (Graff 22)“
- Now comes the creative part: Try to imagine three examples that would illustrate or support this claim. What questions can you ask about the thesis statements?
- We’ve seen that Graff’s first example is a certain kind of religious upbringing. According to Graff, religious fundamentalism tends not to be treated as “intellectualism” in formal academic settings. Yet, Graff asks, what would happen if schools were able to “channel” this kind of knowledge into academic work? What might be some other examples of knowledge that could be channeled into academic work if it were properly recognized as intellectualism? Knowledge of popular culture, video games, or sports? Certain kinds of skilled work and manual labor? What about interpersonal skills and relationships?
How can we use this process to become better writers?
This exercise was designed to illustrate the relationship between a thesis and its supporting paragraphs. In this case, given a thesis, you were asked to imagine three examples to support that thesis. Even though each writer working on this activity will have different examples, the thesis is able to pull them all together into a coherent argument. That’s why spending time on a strong thesis claim will help your papers have clarity and purpose.
- We'll get to citation later in the course, but as a rule of thumb: never cut and paste anything without a note reminding yourself where it came from! ↵